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    Ryan commented on the post, Date with the Sun

    Hey Ariel,
    This is a very happy poem. When I finished i had a smile on my face. Your line ” I was the sun” is very powerful. Kind of says ” it all revolves around me.” Great work!

  • Jimmy,
    I really enjoyed your poem. I can relate to this in so many ways. Just like everyone else I know, mornings are hard for me. I am constantly hitting my snooze button and rolling over to get more sleep. Thanks for sharing.

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    Ryan commented on the post, ISO Sam's World

    Hi Holden,
    Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny.

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    Twelve

     

    There was a cool calming breeze coming

    off the lake, the smell of sweet funnel

    cakes and the sound delightful

    screaming were in the air. I was twelve.

    I walked up the unfamiliar

    Twelve (Stafford Poem)

    Twelve   There was a cool calming breeze coming off the lake, the smell of sweet funnel cakes and the sound delightful screaming were in the air. I was twelve. I walked up the unfamiliar stairs and stood in a long line on...

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    • Hey Ryan!

      Your poem is outstanding, I loved how you encompassed the entire experience of riding the roller coaster. I could picture the roller coaster, the amusement park, and you, being twelve, and how you felt before, after, and during the experience. Great job!

      –Naomi

    • Hi Ryan,
      I really enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing it. I think my twelve year old self can definitely relate to how you realized at the end that you were not as rave as you thought. Even now, I like to think that I am braver than I actually am. But, i think that is the only way to face your fears.

    • Ryan, I thought your poem was terrific. The way it is written makes me feel as if I was right there on the same ride. Nice job.

    • Dear Ryan,
      I really enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing it. Your poem is outstanding.

    • Hi Ryan,
      I really liked your poem. Thanks for sharing it.

  • I for one am a huge lover of fast food. Its easy to get and usually pretty cheap. I feel like that’s the reason why the fast food epidemic is on the rise, its easy and cheap. I’m a pretty active person so burning off those calories and fat is easy. Fast food is a trap for those that don’t exercise or don’t have the time to. I’m not for getting rid…Read More

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