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Lyse commented on the post, Big Decisions
Dear Heymi
I am pleased with your essay, “Big Decision,” because when I was in middle school I had to choose a high school too and I was scared that I was not going to get into a good high school. but park slope chose me and I felt relief
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I saw that one school was really near my home but it ha…Read More -
Lyse wrote a new post
“ Lyse, have you been on social media lately?” my two best friends asked me.
We stood in the crowded school hallway before everyone went inside.
I replied to them, saying, “Yes,” and gossiping
Read More“ Lyse, have you been on social media lately?” my two best friends asked me. We stood in the crowded school hallway before everyone went inside. I replied to them, saying, “Yes,” and gossiping in each other’s ears about what we...
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Lyse commented on the post, What I am made of?
Dear Ishak:
I am inspired by your poem, “What I am made of,” because it shows so many memorable moments. your poem is so toughing because you quoted so many things that everybody goes through every day
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am made of sharing my opinion,” I think this is an interesting quote that shows how you lik…Read More -
Lyse wrote a new post
I was made of fresco that my mother brought, after school was done.
I was made of music I listen to in the morning on the way to school,
In the morning I eat whatever I make
and after that, I take my
Read MoreI was made of fresco that my mother brought, after school was done. I was made of music I listen to in the morning on the way to school, In the morning I eat whatever I make and after that, I take...
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