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  • Oaklad, California, USA
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    • Dear Rosario,

      I think everyone who had a trip felt isolated at first so in a sense you weren’t alone. You had nice illustrations and I enjoyed reading this story from you. Let me tell you about embarrassing moment #3, I cried the first night of my trip because I was really homesick. But as time went on, I formed relationships with the people around me and we were there to support one another in the Colorado Mountains. Your piece brought back memories for me and I appreciate you for sharing it.

      P.S. Had to post twice cause I didn’t log in the first time.

      Sincerely,
      Vesna Sot

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    I had not seen you in 8 years

     

    8 years where I learned how wrong you treated my mother,

    And my mother became my father as well,

    And my brother became my male role model.

     

    But where were you?

     

    8 years wh

    To: Dad

    I had not seen you in 8 years   8 years where I learned how wrong you treated my mother, And my mother became my father as well, And my brother became my male role model.   But where were you?   8 years where I only...

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    • Dear Rosario,
      I know it’s hard to open up about how you feel and especially about your father and how you felt that was a stranger to you. I loved this, I really felt the emotion within every line. When you said “But I don’t know if they were sad tears of finally seeing you or tears of just feeling sorry for you“ it really struck me because you didn’t know how to feel, but this is a really nice peiece I get the story. You’re really brave for sharing this, can’t wait for you to write more!

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    You don’t know what people are going through

    So be nice

     

    My mom’s best life lesson was,

     

    To care for other.

     

    Care for those,

    Who are struggling.

    Care for those,

    Who helped you.

    Why I'm Caring As Hell

    You don’t know what people are going through So be nice   My mom’s best life lesson was,   To care for other.   Care for those, Who are struggling. Care for those, Who helped you. Care for those, Who are too timid to talk for themselves.   People can have a hard...

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    • Hey Rosario,
      I like that in your poem you show how important it is to see the importance of what people say. The fact that you are caring not only because that is who you are, but also because it has been something you learned from family, shows how much you care about the people around you. I also like how you say, “If you’re good, You will receive good.” I also am a believer in being kind to all people around us. kindness shouldn’t be something you pick, and choose, it should be genuine and I think that is definitely a strong personality that you have!

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    I am an incarnation

    Or at least I think my name is.

     

    “Rosario” doesn’t just go back to my panicky parents,

    Screaming at each other trying to figure out a name,

    In the same hospital room

    Where I just h

    Reflecting on the Significance of My Name in 2018

    I am an incarnation Or at least I think my name is.   “Rosario” doesn’t just go back to my panicky parents, Screaming at each other trying to figure out a name, In the same hospital room Where I just had been...

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    • Rosario,
      I am proud of your name memoir .
      You have a great introduction that explains what you are talking about. It really catches the readers attention to keep reading. One sentence you wrote thats stand out to me is, “I am an incarnation Or at least I think my name is.” I think this is powerful to your story because it relates to your whole story.
      Another sentence that i really liked was, ” I will always be honored to be named after him Because I know,He’s watching over me.” This stood out to me because it shows how you have a guarding angel that it watching over you.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you really own your stories.

    • Dear Rosario,
      I never knew this about your name. It is great to read something new about a friend. I hope that you feel some empowerment in learning about yourself more. You learn something new everyday. What a beautiful piece.

    • Dear Rosario,
      I am very impressed with your name memoir because it was a very interesting story to read about and I never knew your name was something so special to you and your family. One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was “I will always be honored to be named after him Because I know,He’s watching over me. This stood out to me because you have a connection with a bother you didn’t meet but still appreciate him and you feel like he is close to you. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you share about something special with your classmates etc.
      Sincerely,
      Grady

    • Dear Rosario of Reflecting on the Significance of My Name in 2018,
      ,
      I am honoring your post ¨Reflecting on the Significance of My Name in 2018¨ because Iḿ amazed by how fearful you are to write/share about your own personal life and your brother passing away and Iḿ sorry for your lost. I also love how you went to Talpa because I always go their when I go to Mexico to thank La Virgen for giving me another year. Not a lot of people go to ¨Talpa¨ or know where it is, I am amazed that you been there, itś so beautiful and I love the meaning of your name it’s really inspiring. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because your writing is really thoughtful and inspiring and your post really grabbed my attention.

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