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Rosamary commented on the post, It's About Time
your poem is really good 10/10
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Rosamary commented on the post, Still Learning
honestly truly amazing so proud of you
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Rosamary commented on the post, You and They
Dear dylan :
honestly,truly your poem is good. you use alot of adjectives and stuff.
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Rosamary wrote a new post
I’m from faux leather couches
I’m from cold tile floors
I’m from tall trees and the faint sounds of bees
I’m from glasses and tv’s
From Gloria and Jeanette
I’m from hearing the yells of grown-ups
From don’t worry
Read MoreI’m from faux leather couches I’m from cold tile floors I’m from tall trees and the faint sounds of bees I’m from glasses and tv’s From Gloria and Jeanette I’m from hearing the yells of grown-ups From don’t worry be happy and sit up straight I’m...
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So im guessing that you dont live in the city because of the bees. The poem has alot of different twists and turns
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Your poem has a lot of deep meaning and it has really good rhymes.
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I really like the rhymes a lot, you had straight bars. 10/10 would recommend
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honestly truly amazing so proud of you
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I love your poem its really good. I like how you put so many emotions to it. My favorite line is “I’m from people with harsh backgrounds and others still learning” because its a really deep sentence.
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Rosemary,
Your poem was written beautifully and I loved how you incorporated many aspects of your life in just a few lines. It was a great snapshot of the experiences that make you, you. You used different sentence structure and rhyme to add power to your voice.
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I like the rhyme you had in you’re poem