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  • Rosa commented on the post, Impossible love

    Dear Samantha:

    Me pareció muy interesante tu escritura Impossible love porque habla de cómo dos niños que están enfermos se enamoran, una frase que me gusta es”hay personas con enfermedades que no quieren enamorarse porque tienen miedo hacer daño a otra persona”yo creo que enamorarse de alguien que está enfermo no es malo al contrario…Read More

  • Rosa commented on the post, Explores the world

    estimada Jocelyn

    Me pareció interesante sobre lo que escribistes sobre ” Explores the world ” porque hablas sobre cómo la amazona se está quemando y es muy triste ver como se está destruyendo el planeta. Algo que me gusto que escribiste fue que como los animalitos se están muriendo por culpa nuestra,porque es cierto nosotros mismos esta…Read More

  • Estimada Lezly

    Me gusto mucho lo que escribistes sobre ”La diferencia entre en el amor y la amistad ” porque es cierto algunas veces por no perder la amistad de una persona decidimos callar nuestro sentimientos. Algo que me gusto que escribistes fue que al final,decidieron expresar sus sentimientos aun con el riesgo de perder la amistad…Read More

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    Hasta ahora en el tema ‘’una historia de barrio’’ hizo recordar algo que pasa en muchos lugares en el libro de una historia de barrio  habla sobre un niño llamado, Mochi que se metio ala   pandilla  Pee wees.

    No tiene que ser asi,

    Hasta ahora en el tema ‘’una historia de barrio’’ hizo recordar algo que pasa en muchos lugares en el libro de una historia de barrio  habla sobre un niño llamado, Mochi que se metio ala   pandilla  Pee wees....

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    Hasta ahora en el tema de ‘’Pequeña historia de García Lorca’’ me hizo recordar de algo muy importante que casi todo el mundo hace, en libro de ‘’pequeñas historias de garcía Lorca’’ habla de sobre  los sueños d

    Sueña pero no te duermas

    Hasta ahora en el tema de ‘’Pequeña historia de García Lorca’’ me hizo recordar de algo muy importante que casi todo el mundo hace, en libro de ‘’pequeñas historias de garcía Lorca’’ habla de sobre  los sueños de Federico...

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    • Dear Rosa:
      I am impressed by your post ‘’Suena pero no te duermas’’ because… you talk about the dreams of Frederico Lorca and how he express his emotions one sentence you wrote that stands out for me is:’’ Yo creo que nunca debes burlarte de alguien al contrario debes de darles ánimos’’ I think this is beautiful because you’re expressing your emotions
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because… you write things about how the writers change the life of the readers.

    • Dear Rosa:

      I am surprised by your post, “Dream but don’t fall asleep,” because I like your topic. I like all the plots you write. And with this text I realize how people care a lot about what others say.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Some people make fun of the dreams of others without thinking about the damage you sometimes do with just a word you tell them.” I think this is sad because people think that they will not affect others by their words. People are wrong to think that.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I’m interested in kind of posts. I would like to know more about how other people can affect with just words.

      Samantha

    • Dear Rosa
      I am surprised with your publication “Dream but do not fall asleep” because you talk about what happens to a man who tries to achieve his goals in life and also talk that nobody believed in him or his friends this is very significant because the regret of that he kept fighting to get them

      A phrase that you wrote that stands out for me is “you must also know how to get up stronger” this implies that he never gave up that he continued to pursue his dreams.

      Thank you for your writing. I hope to continue looking at what you write because I found your writing very interesting and I would like to continue learning more about never being serene and of fighting.

    • Dear Rosa,
      I am intrigued to your post it really grabbed my attention. I like the part where you said “you must also know how to get up stronger.” This helps me that when i fall i shouldn’t give up easily instead i will keep fighting to reach my goals with or without help and support of others.

      Sincerely Rosa

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