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Roman posted a new activity comment
good poem very deep keep going
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@ray-wahab good poem keep going
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@antwan-adams your poem is good.
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Roman wrote a new post
I am from a two-sided tree,
where life isn’t always as dreamed
where people laugh if you say thank you or pleaseI am from the town
where sideshows run the streets
where all you see on people’s feet
are Jor
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gang gang
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Roman, your poem was amazing. I loved the structure of the poem and the things you described in it were very meaningful. I come from a very different world so this poem really made me see things in a different way. I don’t know if I will ever live in a reality like yours but you should not get looked down upon because I think you have a real talent for writing. Good Job!
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I am from a 2 sided tree,
where life isn’t always as dreamed
where people laugh if you say thank you or pleaseI am from the town
where sideshows run the streets
where all you see on people’s feet
are jordans and nikesI am from gunshots
to RIP someone, to candle lights every corner
to crying moms asking why?
where police lift guns instead of…Read More2 Comments-
i like your poem. It’s good.
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“Dope Poem.” – Sam Lin 2016
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Roman,
I absolutely love your poem. Although I live in a very different place than you do, your writing gives me a mental image of your town and what you see. I could not imagine being in your situation and experiencing what you have experienced; however, I feel that it is important to try to understand the perspectives of others. Great job!