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Rojo commented on the post, “Nocturne” by Louise Gluck, Read by Douglas
I really like the poem you chose really depressing, nice
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Read MoreI remember going to Isham Park as a little kid. I remember me and my friends playing soccer. I remember going snowboarding with my dad for the first time. I remember my graduation on zoom. I remember the constant...
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Hello,
I am awed by your poem “I remember” because I can relate to a lot of the things you wrote including the graduating on zoom line.One line that stands out to me the most is “I remember my first day of 6th grade.” I think this line stands out to me the most is because I also remember my first day of 6th grade. I was super nervous for it especially since it was a new school.
Your poem reminds me a lot of myself and I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for your poem I look forward to seeing what you make next.
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Dear rojo
I am satisfied with your poem, “I Remember,” because it reminds me of my own childhood.
One line that stands out for me is, “I remember going to Isham Park as a little kid.”. I think this line is powerful because it is a park you grew up in and I also have a park where I grew up in.
Another line that stands out for me is, “I remember my first day of 6th grade”. I think this line is fascinating because it was a very important part in your life.
Your poem helps me to understand how quick life is that I once heard your poem. it makes me understand that you don’t appreciate something until it’s taken away from you.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next.
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Read MoreI chose this poem. Or, rather, it chose me. My first impression of this poem was that it was very detailed. The poem engaged me, yet, at the same time, made me anxious . A line that particularly makes...
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Rojo commented on the post, My Bathroom
Dear Genesis
I am thankful for this poem. I enjoys because it is unique and funny which is rare in most poems. One line that stands out to me is “I hope you have a place thats peaceful like mine once was”. This line shows how important this bathroom is to you. This poem reminds me that not all poems should be serious, and how some can even be…Read More
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I like parks because there I play and do the things that I like the most. I have a good time there, good writing