Dear yasmin i can tell you put a lot of work on your blog and that you did a very good research. I agree with you that ¨Others might say that at the end of the day that the police officer still serve the community no matter what but our community want to be served with respect and hoping we won’t be harmed. The Oakland police need to look at ba…[Read more]
Dear Anahi my name is Roberto and to start i really like your post, i can tell you put a lot of effort on it.Your article makes me feel sad because immigration is a very sensitive theme. One sentence you wrote that stands for me is. “And their children would probably be affected as well because they’ll see everything that’s going on with their…[Read more]
Do you think it’s fair that students are being served Pre-pack food and not have the choice or option for fresh cooked food? With no good school meals students are going to have a hard time being focused, and th
I really like what you wrote about because lot of kids don’t eat at school because of the school food and it really affects students because students need food to be able to focus at school but food they like because if there is no food that they like they won’t eat.
I Agree with how you started because kids shouldn’t eat pre-packed food it should be cooked and ready for them. It’s Also an amazing way to started because you grabbed people’s attention to keep on reading. I also agree with you because people complain on how tired they are but it’s because they don’t eat breakfast but also it because the food the school offers isn’t good which makes them less focused and not able to learn throughout the day. Something interesting that I learned is that elementary lunch cost less than secondary lunch. Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you do have a point in your writing and know how to get a reader’s attention.
I like your blog “OUSD School Meals”, because you talk about how it is important that people eat good food in school or they won’t be focused in their classwork. One sentence that stood out to me is when you wrote “Additionally, some students receive free lunch or reduced lunch, but still they would rather not eat than eat something that tastes bad. Or they waste the little money they have on chips and things at the liquor store which is not healthy”. This stood out to me because I know that many people can relate to this and rather eat any junk food than what they serve at the schools. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.
This shadow box represents who I am. I added images that represent my Nationality and things that I like to do. I put a world with differents countries because I like cultures, I like to search about differents
Im very impressed by your shadow box. I like the picture of the flag showing your nationality and how much room it takes up showing how important it is to you. I don’t know if that was intentional or not but either way I like it. Keep up the hard work.
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.