Dear Riudy,
I am very intrigued by your animal murder mystery because I myself am a murder mystery lover so this was something that caught my attention. I liked how you described what was going on, and I even pictured it in my head the scene. Thank you for your writing and I can’t wait to see what you post next because you are very creative and a good story writer!

• Janet Rodriguez

Dear Riudy 

I am impressed by your short story, “The Murder Animal Mystery” because it was really interesting to read. I like murder mysteries myself and this was also funny to read. I liked how when I was reading I was able to visualize the events in my head. 

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is: “By luck, Mr Herbert was able to get out of handcuffs and escape. They tried shooting him, but it was too late. Mr Herbert escaped into the woods.” This is just so bizarre to me because how did he get out of the handcuffs and if cops were shooting him, how did none of the bullets hit him or even graze him. Although this is quite strange I also find it very humorous with the donut delivery guy trying to come get his revenge on a cat. 

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to reading what you have next, hopefully some more murder mysteries. I really enjoyed this short story and had very much fun reading it. 

Edward Hernandez