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  • Orange Cove, California, USA
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    So far the plot in “disaster relief by Adam MCClellan  there’s was a disasters and personas fueron lastimadas por la crisis de que las casas se cayeron los carros se destrozaron todo se derrumbó y muchas per

    the disaster

    So far the plot in “disaster relief by Adam MCClellan  there's was a disasters and personas fueron lastimadas por la crisis de que las casas se cayeron los carros se destrozaron todo se derrumbó y muchas personas murieron porque...

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    So far the plot they are currently only three races into this 2019 season and it has been quite exciting already during the Australian Grand Prix the middle pack  which consisted of Daniel Ricciardo with Renault

    2019 grand prix

    So far the plot they are currently only three races into this 2019 season and it has been quite exciting already during the Australian Grand Prix the middle pack  which consisted of Daniel Ricciardo with Renault and Alexander Albon...

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    So far the themes in THE GOLDEN YEAR reminds me of something I experience since pa’s big announcement the whole family has been hard work Ma and pa sold the farm and nearly all our possessions ma and pa shed m

    THE GOLDEN YEAR

    So far the themes in THE GOLDEN YEAR reminds me of something I experience since pa’s big announcement the whole family has been hard work Ma and pa sold the farm and nearly all our possessions ma and pa...

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    So far in saving Trees with science reminds me something i read in another book the that image our beautiful blue planet with no trees.what would life be like without millions of acres of untamed forests you

    Saving Trees

    So far in saving Trees with science reminds me something i read in another book the that image our beautiful blue planet with no trees.what would life be like without millions of acres of untamed forests you might answer...

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    So far the THE CHALLENGES OF STORM CHASING reminds me of angers storms most often appear in plaints of the united states. This area is known as Tornado Alley has a lots of dangers storms because of weather

    The challengers of storm chasing

    So far the THE CHALLENGES OF STORM CHASING reminds me of angers storms most often appear in plaints of the united states. This area is known as Tornado Alley has a lots of dangers storms because of weather patterns...

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    • Hi Raul, I really liked your post. Extreme weather patterns have been hot topic for years but has died down suddenly. I appreciate you introduction back to it. I liked how you included and explanation of why the place in your picture gets such huge tornados. I found a video of a major storm in Texas and I think you will like it https://www.accuweather.com/en/videos/storm-chasers/ohqt7qqd good job!

    • Dear raul
      I am impressed by your post the chagenllers of storm chasing because .. you say about the storms in the united states and the storm have transforming in a tornado one sentence you wrote that stands out for me is;’’ danger storms’’ I think this is important because… the storms helped in the water for the plants and for you crecimiento thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because… your post are interesant and have teach to much people about your post

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    So far the characters in Wolverine remains me of something i saw in the book that the characters say i can’t believe those punks comin After you like that a little blood-lettin’s now and then boys…just to

    THE WOLVERINE (--)

    So far the characters in Wolverine remains me of something i saw in the book that the characters say i can't believe those punks comin After you like that a little blood-lettin's now and then boys...just...

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    So far the plot in ‘’The wonder of the HORSES’’reminds me something I asw when i was in mexico the that baby horses when there born they stay with their  mothers all day for like a week and after two weeks th

    "The wonder of HORSES"

    So far the plot in ‘’The wonder of the HORSES’’reminds me something I asw when i was in mexico the that baby horses when there born they stay with their  mothers all day for like a week and after...

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    • Estimado Raul:

      Estoy asombrado por tu poema de “the wonder of horses” aprendí de cómo los animales nacen y que hacen cuando van creciendo una frase que que escribiste y me gusto fue” live all over the world some live in warm places some live in cold places. And horses come in different colors. A blaze is a white stripe on the face the horses.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que sigues escribiendo.

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    So far the plot baby horses are called foals. At first  foals like to stay close to their mothers. But soon they learn to run and play on  they own.and some horses live in cold places. In the winter,they grow t

    The wonder of Horses

    So far the plot baby horses are called foals. At first  foals like to stay close to their mothers. But soon they learn to run and play on  they own.and some horses live in cold places. In the winter,they...

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    So far the themes in “drones” reminds me of  another text i saw in the library the the drones are istill use in war they fly to war zones they find the enemy. The drones are quiet they are fast they fly under rada

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    So far the themes in “drones” reminds me of  another text i saw in the library the the drones are istill use in war they fly to war zones they find the enemy. The drones are quiet they are...

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    So far in the themes in ‘’this land our land’’reminds me of another text. In ‘’la vida es un paraíso’’because they talk the same thing and hey say the U.S army was in charge in the  1890s.They made roads and bu

    land to land

    So far in the themes in ‘’this land our land’’reminds me of another text. In ‘’la vida es un paraíso’’because they talk the same thing and hey say the U.S army was in charge in the  1890s.They made roads...

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    So far, the central idea in “saving trees with science “ remains me a something i did in mexico because we just to take care of the trees and the animals so the animals can eat and in a fact, if there no trees or

    SAVING TREES

    So far, the central idea in “saving trees with science “ remains me a something i did in mexico because we just to take care of the trees and the animals so the animals can eat and in a...

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    So far the plot in The long road home reminds me of something i experienced is went i play soccer the sometimes i feel bad went i lost. one day went i was playing soccer i lost and i was going home and it star

    The long road home

    So far the plot in The long road home reminds me of something i experienced is went i play soccer the sometimes i feel bad went i lost. one day went i was playing soccer i lost and i...

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    • Estimado raul estoy sorprendido por tu escritura, “The Long Road Home” porque a mi tambien me gusta el futbol y me molesto cuando pierdo. Una frase que usted escribe que se destaca para mi es ‘El libro es algo similar a mi vida porque el libro dice que el niño estaba jugando fútbol y perdió el juego.Creo que esto es algo similar a lo que pasa en la vida real porque muchos niños pierden juegos.
      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribas a continuación, por que me dejó con ganas de saber mas del futbol.

      Rodolfo

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