• Zoe commented on the post, Da Hood 1 year, 3 months ago

    Eduardo,
    This seems like an educational, yet inspiring book. I have not been exposed to many hardships in my life, so I think that reading this would be beneficial for me. I truly believe that with hard work and dedication you can achieve success, no matter the circumstances. It’s great that this book conveys that.
    Thanks for sharing an i…[Read more]

  • Zoe commented on the post, nights 1 year, 3 months ago

    Angela, I really liked the format of your poem. It kept me interested and flows well when read aloud. I can relate to feeling the most lonely at night. Also, I understand where you are coming from with your lines about empathy. Sometimes I feel like I should have empathy for others in certain situations, but I don’t, and it is not something that I…[Read more]

  • Whitlee, your post about the correlation between sports and alcohol is very thought provoking. I had never really thought about how big of an impact these commercials can have. Since sports attract all kinds of audiences (young and old), I think it would be appropriate for broadcasters to refrain from airing a lot of alcohol-promoting advertisements.

  • I am from Nestle Crunch bars, from Airstream and Herman Miller.
    I am from the crystal-clear panels that let sunlight through on a beautiful day.
    I am from the ever-blooming orchid, the snake plant near a crackling

    • Dear Zoe,

      I am excited about your poem because you have used specific details to capture your identity and roots and a way that I, the reader, can visualize. One thing you said that stands out for me is: “From the glistening eyes identical to my fathers flush with matching ferns in the backyard” I think this is great because you juxtapose your features and your father’s with the ferns in your yard. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you are a skilled writer!

  • Day 01
    I have never labeled myself as a ‘good writer’. This is mostly because I don’t often write; not because I don’t like to, but because I simply don’t have time. I think that I would achieve ‘good writer’ sta

  • summers are everlasting but
    i’ve learned to love the days
    spent in the sun with
    my mother soaking in the
    rays of light absorbed
    into my face as I sip on
    ice water that I feel
    running through my body
    as cold as t

  • DAZED AND CONFUSED
    WITHOUT MY MUSE
    AS THE DAYS GO BY
    I MISSED MY BEST FRIEND
    WHO EMBARKED ON A JOURNEY
    MANY WEEKS AGO
    WHERE ARE YOU NOW
    AND WHERE ARE YOU HEADED
    I’M NOT SURE
    SELFISH OF ME
    BUT WHAT CAN I DO
    DAZED A

  • Tracks in Snow

    My audience for this piece is children. I would like my anecdote to have a younger voice, making it easier to read. The purpose of this story is to share a story from the current winter and

  • I think the bystander effect is very prevalent in our society. We think that someone else may step in, so we don’t have to. I hope that people can become more aware of others’ emotions and speak up for what is right.

  • Gardens with grey tree frogs are croaking my name,

    I let their midnight chorus soothe me,

    The song that has always been outside the foggy window.

     

    Songs are of great importance,

    From the smallest

    • Zoe- This is a beautiful poem, great job! I really enjoyed reading this, and I’m not super into poetry, but this one was really captivating to read. You did a great job with imagery, and gave the reader a great sense of what you are imagining. Also your metaphors were awesome, I especially liked the one “have you heard the buzz in your ear of another life passing by yours.” It made me think of how we are surrounded by others all the time, but sometimes don’t see them fully.

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