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    Zoe commented on the post, Da Hood

    Eduardo,
    This seems like an educational, yet inspiring book. I have not been exposed to many hardships in my life, so I think that reading this would be beneficial for me. I truly believe that with hard work and dedication you can achieve success, no matter the circumstances. It’s great that this book conveys that.
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    Zoe commented on the post, nights

    Angela, I really liked the format of your poem. It kept me interested and flows well when read aloud. I can relate to feeling the most lonely at night. Also, I understand where you are coming from with your lines about empathy. Sometimes I feel like I should have empathy for others in certain situations, but I don’t, and it is not something that I…Read More

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    Zoe commented on the post, Alcohol and Sports

    Whitlee, your post about the correlation between sports and alcohol is very thought provoking. I had never really thought about how big of an impact these commercials can have. Since sports attract all kinds of audiences (young and old), I think it would be appropriate for broadcasters to refrain from airing a lot of alcohol-promoting advertisements.

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    I am from Nestle Crunch bars, from Airstream and Herman Miller.
    I am from the crystal-clear panels that let sunlight through on a beautiful day.
    I am from the ever-blooming orchid, the snake plant near a crackling

    Where I’m From

    I am from Nestle Crunch bars, from Airstream and Herman Miller. I am from the crystal-clear panels that let sunlight through on a beautiful day. I am from the ever-blooming orchid, the snake plant near a crackling fireplace. I am from opening...

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    • Dear Zoe,

      I am excited about your poem because you have used specific details to capture your identity and roots and a way that I, the reader, can visualize. One thing you said that stands out for me is: “From the glistening eyes identical to my fathers flush with matching ferns in the backyard” I think this is great because you juxtapose your features and your father’s with the ferns in your yard. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you are a skilled writer!

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    Day 01
    I have never labeled myself as a ‘good writer’. This is mostly because I don’t often write; not because I don’t like to, but because I simply don’t have time. I think that I would achieve ‘good writer’ sta

    Aubiography of a Writer

    Day 01 I have never labeled myself as a ‘good writer’. This is mostly because I don’t often write; not because I don’t like to, but because I simply don’t have time. I think that I would achieve ‘good writer’...

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