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I am from Nestle Crunch bars, from Airstream and Herman Miller.
I am from the crystal-clear panels that let sunlight through on a beautiful day.
I am from the ever-blooming orchid, the snake plant near a crackling
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Read MoreI am from Nestle Crunch bars, from Airstream and Herman Miller. I am from the crystal-clear panels that let sunlight through on a beautiful day. I am from the ever-blooming orchid, the snake plant near a crackling fireplace. I am from opening...
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Day 01
I have never labeled myself as a ‘good writer’. This is mostly because I don’t often write; not because I don’t like to, but because I simply don’t have time. I think that I would achieve ‘good writer’ sta
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Read MoreDay 01 I have never labeled myself as a ‘good writer’. This is mostly because I don’t often write; not because I don’t like to, but because I simply don’t have time. I think that I would achieve ‘good writer’...
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summers are everlasting but
i’ve learned to love the days
spent in the sun with
my mother soaking in the
rays of light absorbed
into my face as I sip on
ice water that I feel
running through my body
as cold as t
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Read Moresummers are everlasting but i’ve learned to love the days spent in the sun with my mother soaking in the rays of light absorbed into my face as I sip on ice water that I feel running through my body as cold as the winter night that I...
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DAZED AND CONFUSED
WITHOUT MY MUSE
AS THE DAYS GO BY
I MISSED MY BEST FRIEND
WHO EMBARKED ON A JOURNEY
MANY WEEKS AGO
WHERE ARE YOU NOW
AND WHERE ARE YOU HEADED
I’M NOT SURE
SELFISH OF ME
BUT WHAT CAN I DO
DAZED A
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Read MoreDAZED AND CONFUSED WITHOUT MY MUSE AS THE DAYS GO BY I MISSED MY BEST FRIEND WHO EMBARKED ON A JOURNEY MANY WEEKS AGO WHERE ARE YOU NOW AND WHERE ARE YOU HEADED I’M NOT SURE SELFISH OF ME BUT WHAT CAN I DO DAZED AND CONFUSED WITHOUT MY MUSE z.p.
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Tracks in Snow
My audience for this piece is children. I would like my anecdote to have a younger voice, making it easier to read. The purpose of this story is to share a story from the current winter and
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Read MoreTracks in Snow My audience for this piece is children. I would like my anecdote to have a younger voice, making it easier to read. The purpose of this story is to share a story from the current winter and...
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Gardens with grey tree frogs are croaking my name,
I let their midnight chorus soothe me,
The song that has always been outside the foggy window.
Songs are of great importance,
From the smallest
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Read MoreGardens with grey tree frogs are croaking my name, I let their midnight chorus soothe me, The song that has always been outside the foggy window. Songs are of great importance, From the smallest of smalls to the tallest of talls, They are...
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Zoe- This is a beautiful poem, great job! I really enjoyed reading this, and I’m not super into poetry, but this one was really captivating to read. You did a great job with imagery, and gave the reader a great sense of what you are imagining. Also your metaphors were awesome, I especially liked the one “have you heard the buzz in your ear of another life passing by yours.” It made me think of how we are surrounded by others all the time, but sometimes don’t see them fully.
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Dear Zoe,
I am excited about your poem because you have used specific details to capture your identity and roots and a way that I, the reader, can visualize. One thing you said that stands out for me is: “From the glistening eyes identical to my fathers flush with matching ferns in the backyard” I think this is great because you juxtapose your features and your father’s with the ferns in your yard. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you are a skilled writer!