• Noor, I loved reading this. I completely agree with what you said. You said that now we are using our right to assemble and freedom of speech to march for what we believe, I am so glad that it is happening because we have to fix issues happening today.Thank you for posting.

  • Emilee, I really liked your post. I like how you used examples of people’s feelings form the past and the present. I agree with what you said at the end about how we need to get back on track and care about morals. I love your call to action at the end. It really got me thinking!

  • Thanks Sophia! I like that you brought up gender, sexual orientation and race. Though I didn’t touch on them I feel strongly about them. Thank you for the great feedback!

  •     Americans believe that everyone is created equal.  Thomas Jefferson was the first person to use the phrase “all men are created equal” in the United States Declaration of Independence (US 1776) which was wri

    • Heather,
      I really liked your post! I think that you bring up an interesting point of whether America really has achieved equality. Some of the evidence you used about women in the workforce suggests that America really has come a long way. However, in my opinion I still believe we have work to do. Like you said, there’s still a gender gap of women and men in the workforce in industries like technology. I also think that there are other ways that America has to improve on equality, whether it’s in terms of gender, sexual orientation, or race. It’s interesting to see how all these forms of equality/inequality have evolved in the years, and how much farther we still have to go. I enjoyed your post very much, and I look forward to seeing your future posts!

      • Thanks Sophia! I like that you brought up gender, sexual orientation and race. Though I didn’t touch on them I feel strongly about them. Thank you for the great feedback!

    • Heather,
      I liked the topic you chose to post about. I thought it was interesting how you focused on the inequality that women have faced and still face as part of the American Creed. I have similar viewpoints as you in this area so it was interesting to read what you had to say. The gender pay gap is still a huge issue today, as well as the opportunity gap. For example, in fields such as cardiology and orthopedics, less than 15% of the surgeons are female. I think it would be interesting if you researched some specific areas of study where women are typically the minority and see what the pay difference is. http://www.heritage.org/testimony/women-and-opportunity-the-modern-workforce I found this article interesting because it helps define wage and opportunity gaps that women experience today. I hope to hear about what you think of the article in future posts!

    • Heather! This is a great piece. I think you should have included the inequality of race, and more issues that show that America does not value equal opportunity. Broadening your topic will challenge you to organize a lot of information into one, persuasive piece, and further prove the point. Great use of quotes and information. Your writing is very organized.

  • Hi Lily,
    I really enjoyed reading this. I have always wanted to try meditation as someone who has a lot of stress and doesn’t know how to cope with it. I just don’t have the time to dedicate towards it. Hopefully I can manage to get this time in because it seems like it would be beneficial.

  • Heather commented on the post, My Body 1 month ago

    Hi Janyah, thank you for posting this. Its a good reminded that what others think of you doesn’t define you.

  • Hi Montana, This was really interesting to read. I’ve heard about the “texting claw” and I’ve heard about the spine issues. I have never heard that if you lean your ha forward to look at your phone you are putting 60 pounds of stress on your neck. That’s crazy! reading this made me want to limit my phone use. Thank you, now I’m more aware of the…[Read more]

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