Dear Ziyair,

I would say that your poem “My body” really caught my attention and was really interesting to read and the reasoning why it caught my attention would be because it telling how the body feels or workouts.

One sentence that stand out to me ” my body feels best when i ate a good meal and drink lots of water ” i think that is really…Read More

Dear Leigh Ann,

In your post, ” Psychopaths,” I learned that kids in a bad environment mindset is really different and even the difference in toys can change them so much. young kids don’t even know from right from wrong. the lack of emotions of parents .how their decisions don’t really make a difference in their minds.

What i think about this…Read More

Dear Leigh Ann,

i am impressed by you post, ” Psychopaths” because it really talking about the kids mind works. I think the information explaining how it works on choosing bad and good.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is : ” grow up also being able to choose between good and evil, in the sense that based on the way they are…Read More

My thought on this poem was that is really hit me because it’s really hard for me to open up on how i feel or to tell people how i truly feel. but throughout this poem is talking about how its ok to show you feel and emotions.