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  • Dear, Luis I really like that you stuck with your dream not a lot people can say that keep up the good work G

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    You´re useless  
    You´re stupid
    Your a fuck up
    You´re a fat ass  
    You,re just like your sisters
    YOU´RE NOT MY SON
    I didn’t let them get to me
    I kept on pushing
    I motivated my self
    To prove them wrong
    But as

    My problems BY Pedro Ramos

    You´re useless   You´re stupid Your a fuck up You´re a fat ass   You,re just like your sisters YOU´RE NOT MY SON I didn’t let them get to me I kept on pushing I motivated my self To prove them wrong...

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    Why am i mad as hell

    Cause i hate everyone

    Everyone gets me mad

    The irritate me which gets me mad

    They talk too much

    There too loud  

    They make stupid jokes

    I hate my self which make me

    why am I mad as hell

    Why am i mad as hell Cause i hate everyone Everyone gets me mad The irritate me which gets me mad They talk too much There too loud   They make stupid jokes I hate my self which make me mad I'm...

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    • Pedro,
      I think your piece is well written. You definitely get your message across.

    • Pedro – Those are a lot of intense feelings that you’re sorting through. I’m sorry. That has to be hard. I hope that you are able to move beyond “mad” one day, or turn your anger into motivation to do something super powerful (because you are capable of that). Thank you for sharing your emotions and thoughts!

    • Pedro,
      These feelings are raw, and your poem reflects that your poem cuts deep. I think writing, at least for me, is a soothing outlet for feelings like this, and from what I can see, when you let it out, you let it out really well. This is beautiful and powerful and harsh. It can make the reader sweat and swear and that is the point of all writing: to make the reader and writer feel something. This is so powerful, and I think I can sense that so are you.

    • Pedro,
      I found this piece to be very passionate and get the message across in a very vivid manner. I believe that there is a lot that you are going through and I am sincerely sorry. There is struggle and strife that we all encounter and it is hard to share emotions like this publicly. Thank you for expressing your feelings through an artistic way. Great job.

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    nice

    it was good

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