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    So far what I read about the book ¨A Long walk to water¨ is really interesting because it talks about how the girl Nya and the boy Salva survive. The girl, Nya, is fetching water from a pond that is two hours’ w

    A Long Walk to Water

    So far what I read about the book ¨A Long walk to water¨ is really interesting because it talks about how the girl Nya and the boy Salva survive. The girl, Nya, is fetching water from a pond that...

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    • Dear Patricia
      I am impressed by your post “A Long Walk to Water” because it shows me how these two kids do what they can to survive. I think its impressive how both of them are from different families but have obstacles to go through. Even though they don’t know each other, they both worry about running into an enemy.

      One sentence that stood out to me is “Salva doesn’t know where his family is while Nya doesn’t know if her family will have enough water. Both of them are afraid of meeting an enemy”. This stood out to me because they both have different situations but are worried about their family.

      Thank you for your writing and i look forward to looking in what you write next. This book really cough my eye and i can’t wait to see which other one i will be reading.

  • Dear evelyn,
    I am impressed by your post, La historia de el Paso, because it is a very interesting story. I think it is really sad because that happens to many people too.

    One sentence you wrote that stands to “Mi proceso fue muy tardado porque aparte no había donde dormir dormíamos en la calle en casas de campanas y pasábamos frío alg…Read More

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    So far, what I read is really interesting about the book “ The walking forest has secrets” because it talks about how a girl named Rhea appears like a mirage in dark and dense, at the very edge of her bac

    The Walking Forest

    So far, what I read is really interesting about the book “ The walking forest has secrets” because it talks about how a girl named Rhea appears like a mirage in dark and dense, at the very edge of...

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    • Dear Patricia:

      I am curious about your publication, “The Walking Forest”, because it is a very interesting story and I like how it expresses the story that keeps me reading and I would like to know more about the story because I want to know what happened to the girl
      A phrase that you wrote that stands out to me is “Sometimes it’s churning in the woods, and when the paths of Rea and the witch collide, a more treacherous and deadly truth than either of them could imagine surfaces.” I think this is intriguing because you can imagine many things about it if they cross if they kill each other or what happens.
      Thanks for writing. I hope to see what you write next, because I would like to know what happens if they are killed or crossed.

    • Dear Patricia:

      I am surprised about your publication “The Walking Forest”, because I like how he expressed himself and how he wrote the story and what is happening to the girl.

      A phrase he wrote that is relevant to me is “She’s desperate to know more until she finds a peculiar boy who offers to reveal its secrets” I think this is very integrative because there is a boy who offers to reveal secrets to him, it is very mysterious because It is not known what kinds of secrets he will reveal.

      Thanks for your writing, I hope to continue looking at what you write below because I found it very integral because I would like to know if they cross or if they were amtrated.

    • The way “The Walking Forest” is written from the point of view of the girl wishing to be more curious and explore the forest’s secrets. As in the text says “But when she reaches out to touch it, the forest vanishes”, I think it is referring to the name of the text as it mentions “Walking”. Relating to how the forest can be a sort of illusion made just to lure in children who are curious enough to play the game to reveal it’s secrets as the witch awaits.

      The way that the author reveals the real intentions of the witch and the girl becoming curious enough to learn more of the forest brings in a more mysterious vibe into the text.

  • Patricia commented on the post, Impossible love

    Dear Samantha:

    I’m excited for your post, “Impossible Love” because sometimes people fall in love when they least expect it. Also because sometimes they fall in love because they feel like they should give each other.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” people who are terminally ill and do not want to fall in love”. I think…Read More

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    So far, the characters in “Juntos” reminds me of my cousin. The book of “Juntos” talks about how the girl Cassia wanted to go to a dance party at night but she didn’t have no one to dance with. The same day Xande

    The Dance of Cassia and Xander

    So far, the characters in “Juntos” reminds me of my cousin. The book of “Juntos” talks about how the girl Cassia wanted to go to a dance party at night but she didn’t have no one to dance with....

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