• Dear Melody,

    I’m impressed about your post because I like how you write about the topic of “I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals.” something that i liked about your post was when you said ” The reason that this is an important topic I chose to write about is that some…[Read more]

  • Dear Erika

    I am so surprised about you post “My views of Oakland” because it shows how you really know your community on oakland I like that you are writing about Oakland crime rates, and how gentrification may be a key factor in causing the community to decrease. Something i like about what you wrote on your post is when you said “ The commu…[Read more]

  • Dear, nakiah

    I’m amazed by your post because it really did make a lot of sense about Oakland that it has pros and cons but overall it’s a good city. Also i’m amazed because it shows how you put in a lot effect on explaining what happens in Oakland and how people view Oakland. One sentence that stand out to me was “Though there are some n…[Read more]

  • Dear Oscar

    I’m so amazed on what you wrote and capable on saying what your full name means to you. And i just like how you connect your name with your parents and soccer and what it means. Something that stood up to me was when you said “I was unique for having that name in every school I went to”. I can connect with you because i’ve never had…[Read more]

  • Dear Arely

    I really like your post “Reflecting on the Significance of My Name in 2018,” because it’s interesting how your name came and what it means to you. Something that stood out to me was when you said “ Having Arely as my name is a very loving relationship due to the fact that is unique but also negative because people not know how to prono…[Read more]

  • Dear stephany

    I really love how you like to go as chata because It really defines you’re story behind your name and how you let other people called you by your nickname is even cool because you let them know who you are and make them feel comfortable. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is when you said “it made me feel unique”.I can…[Read more]

  • Dear, Leslie GT

    I am impressed by your post “Violence Affecting Youth in Oakland” because its saying facts that we see in Oakland now in days. One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Violence keeps adding on communities and had divided Oakland”. I think this is really powerful to me because it’s true i see it in the news and in the str…[Read more]

  • How do you feel about immigration and how does it affect you?

    Immigration is coming to live permanently in a foreign country a place at an airport or country’s border where government officials check the

    • As a child of an immigrant the believe of better life, better education is at heart in whatever we do. But the consistent fear of waking up the next day and finding yourself back to the beginning is haunting many of us. Thanks for sharing this!

    • Dear Paola,
      Thank you for making me read your work. I am impressed with your blog behind immigrants. One sentence that stood out to me the most was “This is explaining how immigrants have the fear to get deported and that immigrants have rights too and they should not fear. It also shows that immigrants can be silent and let other people of higher level oppressed them like stereotyping them” because what your saying is true. I agree with the message you are trying to say behind immigrants.You have really nice analysis and could make more blogs with this good analysis. Another article you might want to read is that is good about your topic on behind immagration is “https://www.insightcrime.org/news/brief/coyotes-feed-on-migrant-workers/. This article is good because its how immagrants get here to the us. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what u write next because your a really good writer and you could publish some good blogs and you have some good analysis.

    • Dear Paola,
      I really liked that you wrote about immigration because it is a really important topic to talk about, especially because of all that has been happening lately. I like that you provided quotes in order to prove your point and make your thesis stronger. I enjoyed reading your post, you should keep writing posts.

    • Dear Paola,
      I really liked that you wrote about immigration because it is a really important topic to talk about, especially because of all that has been happening lately. I like that you provided quotes in order to prove your point and make your thesis stronger. I enjoyed reading your post, you should keep writing posts.

    • Dear Paola,
      I really liked that you talked about such a strong and important topic, especially now with everything that has been happening. I really appreciate that you provided quotes too prove you thesis, and have such a strong conclusion. Thanks again for writing this, hope to read more of your work soon.

  • Love leads to Death

    Love can cause happiness and war

    Love at first sight is what happen with E & A

    Love is something that you can learn from

    Heartbreaks, happiness or not even find love yet

    E will ask

    • Dear Paola,

      I enjoyed the poem that you wrote about love. what really stands out is the fact that you showed how people, feele that they have to choose how to love people. It shows that people are capable of making their own choices in life even when it may not be a beneficial action. One sentence that was interesting was when you wrote, “Love can cause happiness and war….
      Love is something that you can learn from”. I totally agree, that you can learn from any choices you make in life. what is ironic, is that they weren’t able to learn too much about loving and life until it was too late. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.

  • Dear erica,
    One sentence you wrote that stand out to me was ” This view makes me feel at peace, and it has ever since I was little and would hike the mountain with friends”. it stood out to me because I can see what you visualize and i would of liked if connected it to the people who have to see there neighborhood really in bad place and how that…[Read more]

  • Paola commented on the post, Joana’s Identity Box 8 months ago

    Dear Joana,
    Its me Paola I was so impressed that you go to share something from yourself. I love all the detail things that you have and how you talk about dominant narrative and connecting it to the real world. When I was reading your statement I got so connected with you and i love how you talk about were you’re from and kept telling us about…[Read more]

  • Paola commented on the post, Becoming Beautiful 9 months ago

    Dear, Tevy

    The piece you wrote about becoming beautiful is so powerful and mostly because its like a message to all women’s and ppl that are teens. I found thi piece of story so interesting that i actually wanted to read more and like I’m into all that beauty i also question myself and i really enjoyed to read this because i got inspire by the…[Read more]

  • Artistic Statement

    Paola Hernandez

     

    Hey my name is Paola and thank you for thanking your time to read over this statement.Im from Life Academy high school i’m A freshman. This shadow box represents my

    • Paola,
      Your post is really inspiring, especially when you said, “that shows how much I’m proud to be who I am” because you are not afraid to be yourself and often times people are scared to be unique. Also, I think it’s important that you’re not letting stereotypes dictate who you are. I can relate to you in that I want to be successful and I want to prove everyone wrong by doing so. How are you going to become successful? How are you going to measure your success? I think it’s difficult to answer these questions but may be critical part in achieving what you want and knowing that they are right. I look forward to hearing back from you and continue on doing you. Wishing you the best, Andrea.

    • Paola,
      Your Shadow box looks so cool and very creative. I like the way that you involved your culture and what the signicafint.

    • Paola,
      Your shadow box is very unique and interesting. I really like how you added the fence and the light to your box because they really stand out. I also appreciate you for sharing personal stuff about you and your family. I liked when u said that you don’t believe what other people say about you and you know that those statements aren’t true. Thank you for sharing your shadow box with us.
      Sincerely,
      Joana

    • Dear Paola ,

      Thank you for sharing your work. My name is Ingri Mendozanand I am a student at Fremont High School.
      Something I liked about your work was when you mentioned that when people look at you they think your immigrant. That happens to me as well and then I have to say that no I am not an immigrant. Something I have a question about is what are your goals and how are going to achieve them? Anyways feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address of my student blog is http://ingrimfhs2021.edublogs.org/ .
      Thank you!

  • Dear, Calvin
    Im am a student from Life Academy, and I agree with that a lot of people have experienced racism and has affected many people. One sentence that stands out to me is: ” Another solution to getting rid of Racism is having everyone learn about other people and their culture too. Not assuming things that you don’t really know about p…[Read more]

  • Paola became a registered member 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    • Dear paola

      Thank you for sharing your work. My name is dina and I am a student at Fremont High School.
      Something I liked about your work was that you put stuff there about women’s power
      Something I have a question about is what does the airplane represent. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address of my student blog is…[Read more]

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