As a child of an immigrant the believe of better life, better education is at heart in whatever we do. But the consistent fear of waking up the next day and finding yourself back to the beginning is haunting many of us. Thanks for sharing this!

Dear Paola,
Thank you for making me read your work. I am impressed with your blog behind immigrants. One sentence that stood out to me the most was “This is explaining how immigrants have the fear to get deported and that immigrants have rights too and they should not fear. It also shows that immigrants can be silent and let other people of higher level oppressed them like stereotyping them” because what your saying is true. I agree with the message you are trying to say behind immigrants.You have really nice analysis and could make more blogs with this good analysis. Another article you might want to read is that is good about your topic on behind immagration is “https://www.insightcrime.org/news/brief/coyotes-feed-on-migrant-workers/. This article is good because its how immagrants get here to the us. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what u write next because your a really good writer and you could publish some good blogs and you have some good analysis.

Dear Paola,
I really liked that you wrote about immigration because it is a really important topic to talk about, especially because of all that has been happening lately. I like that you provided quotes in order to prove your point and make your thesis stronger. I enjoyed reading your post, you should keep writing posts.

Dear Paola,
I really liked that you wrote about immigration because it is a really important topic to talk about, especially because of all that has been happening lately. I like that you provided quotes in order to prove your point and make your thesis stronger. I enjoyed reading your post, you should keep writing posts.

Dear Paola,
I really liked that you talked about such a strong and important topic, especially now with everything that has been happening. I really appreciate that you provided quotes too prove you thesis, and have such a strong conclusion. Thanks again for writing this, hope to read more of your work soon.

Dear Paola,

I enjoyed the poem that you wrote about love. what really stands out is the fact that you showed how people, feele that they have to choose how to love people. It shows that people are capable of making their own choices in life even when it may not be a beneficial action. One sentence that was interesting was when you wrote, “Love can cause happiness and war….
Love is something that you can learn from”. I totally agree, that you can learn from any choices you make in life. what is ironic, is that they weren’t able to learn too much about loving and life until it was too late. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.

Paola,
Your post is really inspiring, especially when you said, “that shows how much I’m proud to be who I am” because you are not afraid to be yourself and often times people are scared to be unique. Also, I think it’s important that you’re not letting stereotypes dictate who you are. I can relate to you in that I want to be successful and I want to prove everyone wrong by doing so. How are you going to become successful? How are you going to measure your success? I think it’s difficult to answer these questions but may be critical part in achieving what you want and knowing that they are right. I look forward to hearing back from you and continue on doing you. Wishing you the best, Andrea.

Paola,
Your Shadow box looks so cool and very creative. I like the way that you involved your culture and what the signicafint.

Paola,
Your shadow box is very unique and interesting. I really like how you added the fence and the light to your box because they really stand out. I also appreciate you for sharing personal stuff about you and your family. I liked when u said that you don’t believe what other people say about you and you know that those statements aren’t true. Thank you for sharing your shadow box with us.
Sincerely,
Joana

Dear Paola ,

Thank you for sharing your work. My name is Ingri Mendozanand I am a student at Fremont High School.
Something I liked about your work was when you mentioned that when people look at you they think your immigrant. That happens to me as well and then I have to say that no I am not an immigrant. Something I have a question about is what are your goals and how are going to achieve them? Anyways feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address of my student blog is http://ingrimfhs2021.edublogs.org/ .
Thank you!