Up until now I want to go to Binghamton University. I have been given a lot of thoughts of being an automobile designer. In order an automobile designer you have to be able to know all the pieces inside the car,
hi Oswlod. By reading this,I hope the Binghamton University is really good. I’m gonna check it later.For me,i want to go to the college that located in Boston.gook luck and i hope you can definitely go to think college.
My name is Oswaldo Falcon and I was born in Manhattan. I am 15 years old. I have lived in Manhattan and the Bronx. In school, I like to hang out with friends, and when I am out of school, I like to go out to the
today i wrote 3 paragraphs. In the 1st Paragraph i needed to talk about who i am. And the 2nd paragraph i needed to talk about my immigration details. And the 3rd paragraph i needed to say what i went through if i was justice/injustice.
Dear Eliezer :
I am proud with your poem, “You want to know about me?,” because you explained of where you from. Also you showed about how u have a hard working family.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am from a hard working family.” I think this is important because than you could be an example your parents by you in the fut…[Read more]
I am from Washington Heights my home
I am from Reynaldo(dad), Hermelinda(mom), Alexis(brother), Jazlyn(sister).
I am from celebrating Christmas, New Years, and the day of Los Tres Reyes with my family
I am from
I am Surprised by your poem “learn more about who I am and where I from because you have good ideas for writing a poem.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “ I am from a big family were we have a fun time,EVERYTIME” I think this is interesting because you have a good relationship with your family and you can see that you feel good when you are out of them or you are with them.
Another sentence that I like was “I am from eating my grandmother’s tamales”. This stood out for me because in Mexico every December of every year it is almost always normal to see tamales eat to families.
Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time when i was eating tamales with my family was Christmas.
Thanks for your writing. Look forward to seeing what you write next, because I liked how you did your poem.
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