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  • OscarH
  • Oaklad, California, USA
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    I’ve faced a challenge that’s impacted my family. My dad was on a forklift at work unpacking the fruit crates, suddenly the forklift falls on his right knee. He received surgery and was told that he won’t be able

    Issa family love story...

    I’ve faced a challenge that’s impacted my family. My dad was on a forklift at work unpacking the fruit crates, suddenly the forklift falls on his right knee. He received surgery and was told that he won’t be able...

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    • Dear Oscar,
      I really like your writing piece, because I can relate about “They do everything for us, they came to the U.S for us, for us to have a better life. Damn, I love my parents.”, because my parents came here for the same reason. I like how you wrote this piece and the vocabulary you used. I hope you keep writing, keep it up!

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    • I like how you wrote about how you love your family and that’s something i could relate to.

    • Dear Oscar,
      I really enjoyed your comic because is shows how close you and your family are and how you guys help each other out especially when you dad was in the hospital. It is very similar with something that happened to me with my mom she was in the hospital and once she was out me and my family were closer than ever because we realized that things could have been worse. So i’m happy to see that everything is ok. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you seem to have very strong ideas so I look forward to seeing you post more.

    • Dear Oscar,
      This is a pretty cool comic with very good artwork put into it. I enjoyed it because it played into family dynamics and led to love despite what happened to your dad. I could relate to this in a few ways which makes it more interesting for me to look at. I had a situation with my uncle where he was injured, but at the end of the day our family was still together. Great artwork and keep up the good work.

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    Why I’m athletic as hell

    I wasn’t 3 years old yet

    My dad loved soccer

    He played it a lot back then

    He played it in his hometown

     

    It’s passed down in my family

    Damn, was he athletic as hel

    Why I'm Athletic As Hell!

    Why I’m athletic as hell I wasn’t 3 years old yet My dad loved soccer He played it a lot back then He played it in his hometown   It’s passed down in my family Damn, was he athletic as hell   I was 3 years...

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    • Dear Oscar
      I like that you wrote about something you love to do. I also like the way you spaced your poem and the details you put into this. I also liked how you described how it felt to be in a soccer game it made me visualize that I was the one playin soccer lol. Good Job

    • Dear Oscar,
      I really liked reading your Memoir because it was very interesting. A part that I liked about your Memoir is “ I’d come from school and play it in my backyard”. I really like this part because you’re explaining that you love soccer and that was your first thing you would do when you got home. A good thing is that your dad taught you how to play soccer. Because that is what inspired you to be athletic. Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your Memoir was really interesting to read.

      Sincerely,
      Kimberly

    • Dear Oscar I really like your story but just keep doing it.

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    Five letters are put together

    Those five letter build up the name Oscar.

    That’s me, that’s the name my parents came up with and gave me at birth.

    I was unique for having that name in every school I went to.

    How Do We Own And Tell Our Own Story, Starting With Our Name?

    Five letters are put together Those five letter build up the name Oscar. That’s me, that’s the name my parents came up with and gave me at birth. I was unique for having that name in every school I went to....

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    • Dear Oscar

      I’m so amazed on what you wrote and capable on saying what your full name means to you. And i just like how you connect your name with your parents and soccer and what it means. Something that stood up to me was when you said “I was unique for having that name in every school I went to”. I can connect with you because i’ve never had someone named like me and it makes it feel more unique and can be yourself. Another thing that i liked about your post was when you said “ Which was being shy, quiet, and cooperative, which is what I believe defines me.Being shy as a mole hiding in its hole was very unfortunate in my past years.I decided to make a change and be as loud as a horn.It worked, and I’m not as shy as before”. I liked this one because as your sister I can see that you’re not shy and you a good brother and you have overcome being shy now you have learn to make changes to be successful.I love your post and encourage you to post more because I would love to see what else you have to write

      Sincerely,Paola H

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