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I’ve faced a challenge that’s impacted my family. My dad was on a forklift at work unpacking the fruit crates, suddenly the forklift falls on his right knee. He received surgery and was told that he won’t be able
Read MoreI’ve faced a challenge that’s impacted my family. My dad was on a forklift at work unpacking the fruit crates, suddenly the forklift falls on his right knee. He received surgery and was told that he won’t be able...
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I like how you wrote about how you love your family and that’s something i could relate to.
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Dear Oscar,
I really enjoyed your comic because is shows how close you and your family are and how you guys help each other out especially when you dad was in the hospital. It is very similar with something that happened to me with my mom she was in the hospital and once she was out me and my family were closer than ever because we realized that things could have been worse. So i’m happy to see that everything is ok. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you seem to have very strong ideas so I look forward to seeing you post more. -
Dear Oscar,
This is a pretty cool comic with very good artwork put into it. I enjoyed it because it played into family dynamics and led to love despite what happened to your dad. I could relate to this in a few ways which makes it more interesting for me to look at. I had a situation with my uncle where he was injured, but at the end of the day our family was still together. Great artwork and keep up the good work.
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Oscar commented on the post, Why I Am Addicted As Hell
Dear Luis,
gym life, It’s very good to stay fit you’ll be getting a lot of compliments. All of that takes hard work and dedication first. I like the lines “Ignore the voices that tell me you are wasting your time” It must be hard to actually ignore them because one you do you pretty much gave up. Keep striving to become buff Luis. -
Oscar wrote a new post
Why I’m athletic as hell
I wasn’t 3 years old yet
My dad loved soccer
He played it a lot back then
He played it in his hometown
It’s passed down in my family
Damn, was he athletic as hel
Read MoreWhy I’m athletic as hell I wasn’t 3 years old yet My dad loved soccer He played it a lot back then He played it in his hometown It’s passed down in my family Damn, was he athletic as hell I was 3 years...
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Dear Oscar
I like that you wrote about something you love to do. I also like the way you spaced your poem and the details you put into this. I also liked how you described how it felt to be in a soccer game it made me visualize that I was the one playin soccer lol. Good Job -
Dear Oscar,
I really liked reading your Memoir because it was very interesting. A part that I liked about your Memoir is “ I’d come from school and play it in my backyard”. I really like this part because you’re explaining that you love soccer and that was your first thing you would do when you got home. A good thing is that your dad taught you how to play soccer. Because that is what inspired you to be athletic. Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your Memoir was really interesting to read.Sincerely,
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Dear Oscar I really like your story but just keep doing it.
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Oscar commented on the post, Michael's Name Memoir
Dear Michael Đao,
I like how you have a last name that’s written very different aside from other students. I always heard the last name Nguyen, yet I never heard Đao until I met you. Very confusing picture, doesn’t connect to your story but, whatever floats your boat I guess. Very good description of your name! - Load More Posts
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Dear Oscar,
I really like your writing piece, because I can relate about “They do everything for us, they came to the U.S for us, for us to have a better life. Damn, I love my parents.”, because my parents came here for the same reason. I like how you wrote this piece and the vocabulary you used. I hope you keep writing, keep it up!