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    Omar commented on the post, Emily:)

    Dear Emily :
    I relate with your bio, “Emily:),” because my mother had me at a very young age as well, and I also don’t have a very close relationship with my father because of the fact that he left my mother before she was born (and it’s not an uncommon thing either, which sucks).

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I think hig…Read More

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    So- My name’s Omar. I’m Dominican and Jamaican, but I was born in Presbyterian Hospital 15 years ago. Some important things to know about me, uhhh: I’m artistic, I guess? I like to write stories, even thoug

    "Seems I'm Full of Rage"

    So- My name’s Omar. I’m Dominican and Jamaican, but I was born in Presbyterian Hospital 15 years ago. Some important things to know about me, uhhh: I’m artistic, I guess? I like to write stories, even though I haven’t...

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    • Dear, omar:

      I feel relaxed because your bio title, “Artistic, I guess?” speaks for itself, you tell a story about you and it shows that you have a great personality.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “… I felt like I needed him, and I didn’t because it’s been 7 years since I’ve met him,” I think this shows that you are a strong person because you push through the toughest course in life.

      Another sentence that surprised was: “I do enjoy writing poems…” This stood out for me because as your friend I never knew you enjoyed writing poems.

      One sentence you wrote reminds me of me. “I like to- and I can’t stress this enough- sleep. I love to sleep,” I also love to sleep on my free time.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I love reading your stories even tho it’s not a story it actually happened.

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    My cherries and wine,Rosemaries and thymeAnd all of my peaches To heal the wounds,The wounds you burned onto meOnto my skinMy cherries and wine,Rosemaries and thymeTo heal the wounds,The ones you laid onto

    To Heal The Wounds

    My cherries and wine,Rosemaries and thymeAnd all of my peaches To heal the wounds,The wounds you burned onto meOnto my skinMy cherries and wine,Rosemaries and thymeTo heal the wounds,The ones you laid onto meScars and scabs,Painful drives in cars...

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    I am from Baby Wipes and BroomsFrom a baby who endlessly tears them out of their proper placingI am from the living room, and the couch that comes with it.I am from Spanish food and ground turkeyBecause mom

    "Of Course Not"

    I am from Baby Wipes and BroomsFrom a baby who endlessly tears them out of their proper placingI am from the living room, and the couch that comes with it.I am from Spanish food and ground turkeyBecause mom thinks...

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