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Oliver wrote a new post, Should people care about their own lives? 1 month, 1 week ago
What I know about the situation is that the people in the poem are having their whole life being summarized. In the poem people are doing certain things such as drinking and “singing sins.” They are a person who
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Oliver wrote a new post, Questions about “We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks 1 month, 3 weeks ago
It brings up the questions, how do you want to live your life? Should you make responsible or irresponsible decisions, and should you try to live your life to the fullest. The best out of these is How do you w
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Oliver commented on the post, Pelham Bay Park 2 months, 1 week ago
Dear Octavio
I’m assuming that this is about soccer or some sport. If it is then I really like how you didn’t straight up say it but instead made hints to it such as ball, pass, and shoot.
One line that stands out for me is You miss and hate will come. This line is intriguing because of how it’s talking about something that should be enjoyable…[Read more]
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Oliver wrote a new post, A Place of Happiness 2 months, 1 week ago
We got out of the train station in the mid spring eveningWalking down the streets of London with our phones outStanding while the bright lights pass byListening for the slightest differenceThe shape, the
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Dear Oliver,
I was interested in your post because of the photo. I really like the Ford GT.
I am curious about a few lines from your poem. One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you say, “We don’t go in
That might be a bad choice
With the blinding lights in our face”What do the blinding lights represent? Are they car lights? I only ask this because your car photo makes me think that.
Thanks for your photo and poem.
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Dear Oliver,
I am interested in your poem because of the way you talk about how cars made you happy.I like the lines when you say
“London
Our place of happiness”
I like this line because of how peaceful it sounds. A place of happiness.
I look forward to seeing more of you work.
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Oliver commented on the post, Guitar player from DR 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I loved how you mentioned all of the good and bad in your life. It really struck me when you talked about gang violence and your incident with a gang. I can’t even imagine how i’d feel if that happened to me. I would also like to say how sorry i am for your losses and I can’t even get the slightest idea on how i’d react if that happened to me. It…[Read more]
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Oliver commented on the post, In My Neighborhood 3 months ago
Dear George,
I liked how you were able to express this place you love. The photos you took were taken from many different points of view and really can show all of this places features. It was also good how you took the pictures with people in the park to show that you’re not the only person who likes this location.
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Oliver wrote a new post, Cars and Flowers 3 months ago
Manhattan Motorcars
Manhattan Motorcars is a place that has given me some great memories. This place has given me the chance to not only see cars from companies like Ferrari and Lamborghini but
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Oliver commented on the post, Is God Real ? 3 months ago
I feel that it’s very interesting how you thought about this topic due to how so many people wouldn’t think about wether god is real or not so deeply. It’s a topic I never really thought far into and your opinion has really hooked me on how you think about this. I agree with your idea of all the different reasons why people may believe in god or…[Read more]
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Oliver commented on the post, Big Heart 3 months ago
I really liked how much you went into your life and how passionate you seem about it. Overall i thought it was very good and enjoyed seeing things like your life dreams and how you want to fight against the bad being done in America to make life fair for everyone. I am also impressed how you weren’t scared to just let all your emotions and…[Read more]
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Oliver wrote a new post, -_- ._. 0_0 $_$ 3 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know much about any of my families history. One thing however is that both of my parents are Jewish and we celebrate big Jewish holidays such as Hanukkah and Yom-kippur. Even though we do this we a
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Oliver commented on the post, Change 4 months ago
I liked how you brought real world problems into your poem. It really made a deeper understanding of the struggles in the situation. You talked about the weather changing and all of the destruction that is happening which can make people think deeper into the poems theme.
you’re welcome Georgina or Curious George! 🙂
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Oliver commented on the post, What does she remember? 4 months ago
Your poem was very deep going into so much detail about your life. I liked how it showed the good and bad that can happen in a persons life story. Parts such as when you were cut by a thorn were very engaging because of how you include the smallest thing yet it can have a big effect.
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Oliver wrote a new post, Supercar Supreme 4 months ago
I am passionate about them
I love the way they
Look
Sound
It started with cars
Then to trucks
Finally to supercars
I memorize them quickly
Quicker than anything else
From the Jesko to
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Dear Oliver:
I am interested in your poem, “Supercar Supreme,” because I too find cars very intriguing.
One line that stands out for me is, “Determined to have them all In the future” I think this line is Funny because… We all would love to have a supercar one day and I really Hope one day you will achieve you goal.
Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. It was also about cars, but rather it was about a bad experience with a car rather than a good one.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Maybe it will be about cars or maybe something else I know it’s gonna be just as good as this.
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Oliver wrote a new post, You Don’t Remember 4 months ago
I remember somethingsBut I don’t remember othersI remember my great grandmotherSeeing her every year as a young kid.I don’t remember my school life as a young kid thoughI remember when my old babysitter was lat
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Dear Oliver,
Your poem “You Don’t Remember” made the think about all the things I do and don’t remember. I too remember my great grandmother, and the layout of her room in the retirement home but I only remember sparse bits of my life from before fifth grade. It’s something that doesn’t get very much attention brought to it. Your line “I don’t remember when I first got into cars though” really resonates with me. I too am into cars but I don’t remember the exact day or event that caused me to start working on them and even consider it a career path, I just remember the choice was made over a summer.Thanks for your poem. I’m looking forward to what you write next. The fact that you wrote about a topic that isn’t though about often and that you appear to have a similar interest to me will bring me back.
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Oliver wrote a new post, Please Don’t Read This 4 months, 2 weeks ago
If I said I was from a New York boroughwhere there’s light in the day and night,would you know where I’m from?It’s best at night when the sky is dark but the city is still shining bright.Where I’m from, I
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Hey, Oliver. I stumbled across your post and was compelled to read it by the title. I really like what you wrote and if your title was set in place seriously, I encourage you to keep working until you are more confident in your work. I would love to hear more about where you are from in the future!
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Oliver became a registered member 5 months, 1 week ago
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I feel that, besides your questionable grammar you ask too many questions that you don’t answer, the few ones you do answer are barely supported with anything that can help the readers understand the question or poem in general.