I feel that, besides your questionable grammar you ask too many questions that you don’t answer, the few ones you do answer are barely supported with anything that can help the readers understand the question or poem in general.

Dear Oliver,

I was interested in your post because of the photo. I really like the Ford GT.

I am curious about a few lines from your poem. One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you say, “We don’t go in
That might be a bad choice
With the blinding lights in our face”

What do the blinding lights represent? Are they car lights? I only ask this because your car photo makes me think that.

Thanks for your photo and poem.

Dear Oliver,
I am interested in your poem because of the way you talk about how cars made you happy.

I like the lines when you say
“London
Our place of happiness”
I like this line because of how peaceful it sounds. A place of happiness.
I look forward to seeing more of you work.

Dear Oliver:
I am interested in your poem, “Supercar Supreme,” because I too find cars very intriguing.
One line that stands out for me is, “Determined to have them all In the future” I think this line is Funny because… We all would love to have a supercar one day and I really Hope one day you will achieve you goal.
Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. It was also about cars, but rather it was about a bad experience with a car rather than a good one.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Maybe it will be about cars or maybe something else I know it’s gonna be just as good as this.

Dear Oliver,
Your poem “You Don’t Remember” made the think about all the things I do and don’t remember. I too remember my great grandmother, and the layout of her room in the retirement home but I only remember sparse bits of my life from before fifth grade. It’s something that doesn’t get very much attention brought to it. Your line “I don’t remember when I first got into cars though” really resonates with me. I too am into cars but I don’t remember the exact day or event that caused me to start working on them and even consider it a career path, I just remember the choice was made over a summer.

Thanks for your poem. I’m looking forward to what you write next. The fact that you wrote about a topic that isn’t though about often and that you appear to have a similar interest to me will bring me back.

Hey, Oliver. I stumbled across your post and was compelled to read it by the title. I really like what you wrote and if your title was set in place seriously, I encourage you to keep working until you are more confident in your work. I would love to hear more about where you are from in the future!