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    Dear Yaharia,
    Your poem was very descriptive and vivid. While i was reading i was able to imagine in my head the actual scene that occured. i like your poem in general….good job

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    Family dynamics

    Sadness
    Tears running down our faces
    No one expected it to come this soon
    We knew he was sick
    But it was still to soon

    “RING RING”
    We got a call from Mexico
    All we heard was sobbing from the pho

    Family dynamics Sadness Tears running down our faces No one expected it to come this soon We knew he was sick But it was still to soon “RING RING” We got a call from Mexico All we heard was sobbing from the phone The only thing that was...

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    • Dear Octavio, This poem showed a side of you, you usually would not see. I think this is a very deep poem. I like the line, “The feeling of someone important in your life passing away is like a bullet to the brain” I like this line because, I can really relate to it.

    • Dear Flavio,

      Sorry to hear about your Grandpa passing away. You did a really good job of turning that traumatic event into a beautifully written piece. It must have been hard speaking about this topic but I appreciate you for doing so.

      Sincerely,
      Vesna Sot

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    Octavio commented on the post, College Tuition

    Dear bless, the president wouldn’t have to worry about there kids tuition. he’ll prolly just hire a professor to go to the white house and educate them. i enjoyed your piece… keep it up though…

  • Dear manase, Animals are animals there going to pass (DIE) eventually. But as there are alive they should be left alone and out of harm. I enjoyed your piece keep up the good work……..

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