Dear Ian: I am intrigued with your reading of Rachel Sherwood's poem, “The World in the Evening,” because when you read it I was able to get a deeper understanding of what this poem could mean. One set of lines that stands out for me is, “miniature guerillas that mimic the ancient...
Thanks for your poem! I look forward to seeing what you make next because I like how you use different literary techniques one of which is enjambment. I also liked how you talked about NYC Culture like music and entertainment.
Your poem is very similar to Mi Pueblo, I think this because you both say the name of your town and then say "My town" after that. I look forward to reading more of your poems it truly is a great poem!
I picked this comment because I loved how Baldwin distracted himself from trouble by working.
I picked this comment because if Beale Street Could Talk took place in NYC but why was the title named Beale street? Does it have something to do with Beale streets History?
I picked this comment because I was curious at the time Why was Fonny In Jail? Baldwin didn't tell the readers until the final sections in the book.
I picked this comment because it seemed Baldwin was speaking through Daniel, and he sounded angry.
after everything that happened I don't think she wants to lose Fonny. That dream shows that Tish is scared and she has fear that some thing bad can happen between them.
yeah I agree, maybe Fonny doesn't trust Hayward and he feels that he is not going to help him
Hi Cristian, I really like how you show data to inform the readers, I don't think that the two pharmaceutical companies that have the most effective vaccine should sell the vaccine now, what I think is that they keep researching and do test trials so they can have the...
Dear Drew, I Love that you give insight on the Poems of Langston Hughes, I look forward to reading the poems.
Dear Tawan This is Amazing I like how you advocate the steps to limit the spread of Covid-19. In many places is getting bad like Florida,Texas,North Carolina because people over there choose no to wear a mask. Great job!
Ian, thank you for the feedback, now that i'm reading over my work I realized my mistake, i'll make sure i'll edit it.
Dear Cristian, I totally agree with you, it's very sad that High school sports are cancelled and it ruins Sports for kids who were looking forward for to trying out or participating. However, we need to be safe and limit the spread of Covid-19 so that we have...
Thanks for your post. I look forward for more post about 1984. I like how you summarize the passage almost as if i'm reading the book!
I really appreciated how you were very detailed about this book!
Hi, Melissa I like how you wrote about this movement this can totally spread awareness. Ice is a horrible for stripping and separating people from their families, and leave families living in harsh conditions with no basic needs.
Hi, Melissa I like how you wrote about this movement this can totally spread awareness.
Great response! I look forward to seeing you right the next book because I really like you tell your story with imagery.
It is really sad and a change that needs to happen in this world right now. Innocent children are being stripped away from there families. If the United States is truly the land of the free, they should let Immigrants be free. The everyday necessities are being stripped...