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  • Dear Tawan
    This is Amazing I like how you advocate the steps to limit the spread of Covid-19. In many places is getting bad like Florida,Texas,North Carolina because people over there choose no to wear a mask.
    Great job!

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    Ocean commented on the post, One of us is Next

    Ian, thank you for the feedback, now that i’m reading over my work I realized my mistake, i’ll make sure i’ll edit it.

      • Dear Cristian, I totally agree with you, it’s very sad that High school sports are cancelled and it ruins Sports for kids who were looking forward for to trying out or participating. However, we need to be safe and limit the spread of Covid-19 so that we have a chance to participate in highschool sports.

        I look forward from hearing more from you!

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        Ocean commented on the post, 1984 plot analysis

        Thanks for your post. I look forward for more post about 1984. I like how you summarize the passage almost as if i’m reading the book!

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        Developed response to The autobiography of Malcolm X,

        In Malcolm X  autobiography , the author talks about his life an as an activist, a criminal, and his childhood In Malcolm X  autobiography , the author talks about his life an as an activist, a criminal, and his childhood When...

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        • Malcolm x auto biography is a good book and i really like the response you had on it i mess with the fact that you mentioned his whole life before being an activist.

        • I really liked how you said how you interpreted the book and his life before being an activist

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        Character archetypes of Malcolm X

        Malcolm X is a dynamic character. His archetype changes over the course of the story . At the beginning of the story, he  is the archetypal The common criminal. This can be seen on page 100 , where the...

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      • I really appreciated how you were very detailed about this book!

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        Ocean commented on the post, Abolishing ICE

        Hi, Melissa I like how you wrote about this movement this can totally spread awareness. Ice is a horrible for stripping and separating people from their families, and leave families living in harsh conditions with no basic needs.

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        Ocean commented on the post, Abolishing ICE

        Hi, Melissa I like how you wrote about this movement this can totally spread awareness.

      • Great response! I look forward to seeing you right the next book because I really like you tell your story with imagery.

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        One of us is Next

        Phoebe , the protagonist in One of us Is Next , has a few traits that influence her relationships with others. One, she is brave. Two, she is Strong .  Three, she is sneaky. These traits influence her relationships with others....

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        • Dear Ocean,

          I am interested with your post “One of us is Next” because Phoebe sounds like a good character. She has very interesting qualities that make her a unique character. She sounds like someone who would make the book very good to read.

          One thing you said that stands out to me is “One, she is supportive”. I think this is interesting because in your post I didn’t understand what you meant by that. This is because you also stated that she cheated on her boyfriend with her sisters boyfriend. If she can do something like this to her own sister then I don’t know what you mean when you say that she is supportive.

          Have you seen this book? https://m.barnesandnoble.com/w/one-of-us-is-lying-karen-m-mcmanus/1124568207. I thought you might like this book because it is the written by the same author as the book you posted about. Another reason is because it is the prequel to “One of us is Next” so if you liked this books you would also probably like “One of us is Lying”

          Thank you for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because this post was interesting and I think that if I keep looking at your posts, then I can get more good book recommendations like this one.

        • This book looks interesting I might read it next.

        • Dear, Ocean

          I really enjoyed how you explained the traits of Phoebe and how she is, but I specifically enjoyed the part where you phoebe was getting molested and how this is a big problem now in days. But it also showed how Phoebe stood up and showed she is strong in such situation where some wont know what to do when stuck in that position.

        • this book seems really interesting might check it out!

        • Dear Ocean

          The book of the cover makes me think that one of us will go either now or later in life this referrer to life that life is short for all of us A reminder to all of you out their money doesn’t bring you anywhere what you can do with money is buy stuff but health is First in life because you can’t buy health with money.

          • Dear Ocean
            One thing that stands out to me is the name of the book because it Relates to life and it makes me think that either we are going to die now or later in our lives and when i think about it makes me think about that life is short so what I would keep in my mind instead of overthinking i would just keep to myself live while young and have fun and enjoy life because working hard doesn’t bring you no where in terms of health you say you like it and you buy it but you can’t buy health so I suggestion everyone to have this in their mindset that money comes and goes but have health first in your life

        • Ian, thank you for the feedback, now that i’m reading over my work I realized my mistake, i’ll make sure i’ll edit it.

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            One of Us Is Lying

            In One of Us is Lying ( the book before One of Us is Next in the series) Nate  is a dynamic character. His archetype changes over the course of the book. At the beginning of the book, he is...

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            Ocean is feeling Shocked

            Pheobe Lawton secrets got revealed and she is the first victim of truth or dare

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