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    The spider’s web

    so fragile but

    at the same

    time unbelievably strong

    covered in morning

    Dew it is a home

    for the spider

    trapping the spiders food

    providing a safe place

    for the insect’s offspring

    Williams I.S.O

    The spider's web so fragile but at the same time unbelievably strong covered in morning Dew it is a home for the spider trapping the spiders food providing a safe place for the insect’s offspring

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    I ate

    the last  chocolate

    In the pantry

     

    The one  you

    were probably saving

    for after lent

     

    Forgive me

    for it was

    sweet and salty

    And delicous

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    I ate the last  chocolate In the pantry   The one  you were probably saving for after lent   Forgive me for it was sweet and salty And delicous

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    • Nikki, this is a good poem. I go to a catholic school so I know about lent and how hard it is so give something up for that long. This is great, good work!

    • I definitely like the them you are going for here. I think you could afford a little more on the overall concept but the story and necessary development for it are definitely present. Good work.

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    Shoo fly please do not bother me

    I do not want you buzzing around my food

    Can’t you tell you’re putting me in a bad mood

    Why can’t you go outside and fly by that tree

    You will gain so much more by being

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    Shoo fly please do not bother me I do not want you buzzing around my food Can’t you tell you’re putting me in a bad mood Why can’t you go outside and fly by that tree You will gain so much...

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    • Nikki,
      I really like the contrasting voices you picked here, they work super well. I love the beginning line too.

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