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    I agree with you that puppy mills are bad but, there is a difference between puppy mills and breeders. Puppy mills produce litter after litter of dogs and they don’t care about the wellbeing of the puppies or the mother. They keep them in tight and disturbing spaces. All they care about is the money. Leginament breeders produce litters that will b…Read More

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    Elizabeth, Melany, and Ying,
    I totally agree with your thesis statement. Middle school plays a huge part of a person’s life. A kid becomes a teenager. They hit a time in their life where everything is changing. Some examples are; appearance, voice, and even friends. Most kids go through a phase of not knowing who they are. When these kids go to…Read More

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    Since the founding of the United States, the immigrants that make the journey here are coming to live a better life. They have different reasons for coming whether it’s to escape police brutality, avoid p

    What is Your American Dream?

    Since the founding of the United States, the immigrants that make the journey here are coming to live a better life. They have different reasons for coming whether it’s to escape police brutality, avoid political persecution, practice the religion...

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  • Jack,
    I like how you layed out your argument on ” What is American creed?”. I agree that our nation is politically divided and that makes us american because he have the right to speak our mind. I like how you stay around the topic of freedom of speech. You also have a good ending that make the reader think.

  • Bailey,
    I love how you start this piece it is a really good “hook”. I also like your word choice it strengthens your argument. I also loved how you organized your piece.

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