The story was written really well, I wanted to keep reading to reach the conclusion. It really made me think about how saying “I hate you,” can have such a large impact. Mothers give a lot and I know what it feels like to have that hatred for stupid reasons. The dream sequence was good, I believed it was the real event until you woke up and saw…[Read more]

I liked reading about all the different places and how they approach sex education. “They still promote abstinence as a contraception method, however, they teach students about other contraceptives available like birth control, condoms, Plan B, etc.” is something that I have been exposed to at school and I think it’s better than straight…[Read more]

Hi Ivan! I really liked this article about such an important topic. I liked your quote “This individual is experiencing having to move due to gentrification, showing that it’s impossible for him to flee from his problems.” The interviews you referenced really strengthened your argument. This link might be good to check out h…[Read more]

I like this article a lot, probably because not most people would think to question such a weird internet thing. I liked this statement “The definition already defined bread as “a staple food”. In conclusion, stapling is in bread’s nature. ” I never thought of that, and it is a stretch but it’s something. I would recommend better sources for a str…[Read more]

Hi Chris 🙂
I’m in the middle of this category, I talk too much but I also like being alone a lot. I liked how you were able to gain some understanding from writing this article. I thought this quote somewhat reigned true since I am socially awkward: “I think big talkers or people who have to have a random sound going in the background keeps them…[Read more]

Hi Peter,

I liked the beginning of your article because it is very neutral. However, I do not agree with your argument about abortion. First off, I am a female and I would have to raise the child despite what money I don’t have. There is the option of adoption, yes, but it is also a matter of the toll with going through a pregnancy. I am both…[Read more]

I like this article a lot. The quote at the beginning (“Trust takes years to build, seconds to break, and forever to repair”) was a nice way to start out the article. This topic is extremely important in this day and age. This might be an interesting paper to check out htt…[Read more]

Hi Angela,
This article is really good. I liked how you had so many sources and how well the article was written. This quote ” “The gap between incomes along with discrimination and many other factors adds to another issue that Hispanic families face: insufficient funding for higher education,” reminded me a bit of the book Aftershock by Robert…[Read more]

Hi Sophie,

I really liked this article since it relates really well to my life. I appreciated the study by Stanford, “any more than two hours of homework every night is counterproductive.” What if you switched the first and second paragraph?
I think it would flow a tad better. Heres a source that might be useful:…[Read more]

Hi!
I like your connections of America to eagles. I do often relate to being an American to eagles as a joke. “She takes a plane. That flies. Just like an eagle,” I liked this connection because I would have never thought of it. America is such a weird country, the connection to eagles makes a lot of sense. Maybe extend it with more sources but…[Read more]

This might be an interesting source to check out 🙂 https://purpletod.co.za/docs/Standardized%20Testing.pdf

I liked learning more about the topic of standardized testing more just because I’m currently applying to college. I actually ranted about the cost of applying to college on social media the other day because I was so fed up. “Students…[Read more]