I liked how you used descriptive words so I, the reader, could picture the scenery in my mind. The best part I liked is how you closed your poem. “… from patience and from being successful, Dreaming and enjoying. I am from these moments. I am from this home of love.” I just thought it was cool because I could relate to that.
I love everything what you post about. It was interesting to me read about that what you write. I’m want to be artist so I heart about that the art is frowned upon. I’m totally agree with you.
The question that I choose is what life will I have in my future? I’m often thinking about this question, because I don’t know what will happen in my future, what good things will be or what not good. Nobody
I was surprised to read the post about the future. It was awesome because of talk about “your future,” you are wondrous because you support yourself. You still thinking about your future that is helpful. We don’t know what is your future is gonna be, you have to find out on yourself.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ I’m always asking myself about my future, questions like what will I be” I think this is a good idea because… you have to find out what is your future is gonna be, nobody couldn’t find out what is your future, and nobody knows what is you won’t be
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what is your future gonna be, good luck
This is interesting to me because in the past I was like you, I don’t know what I will be in the future. But I try to find out what I want to be in the future. So, Munisa try to find out what you want.
Thanks for this poem about “Bench”. I really like picture that you post it’s really beautiful and unusual, also I like most is the poem that you wrote. In this picture things that effected me is unusual sky with different colors and sunshine in the middle.
I interested in college and I want to know about it more things to be ready for college.” What kind of information gets you really excited? ” Information that gets me really excited is if I finished school good and go to the best college.
Hi Munisa! What kinds of things will help you get ready for college? You could research the kinds of different colleges that are out there (like public or private, in New York state or the city), or the kinds of scholarships that exist for students!
I am inspired by your post,”Me, Immigration and Justice,” because I like that what about you write. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” a man walked to the front of me and said “Oh! Chinese girl is beautiful. I love Chinese girl.” In my opinion, this was unjust because this man did not respect me.” I think this is hor…[Read more]
My name is Munisa and I was born in Tajikistan. I am 15 years old. I have lived in Tajikistan, Russia, and now I am living in Brooklyn NYC. In school, I like to teachers that teaching me, every time I am
I live in Avenue H near Coney Island road. My neighborhood is unique because in my neighborhood have many, many stores. You can buy there different foods, clothes, different technologies, different things that you need for school or everything that you want.
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