Munisa commented on the post, Where I'm From
Your poem is good. I love your poem. It was interesting to me read about your “Where I’m from”. Thanks for your writing. I will look forward to seeing what you write next.
I am from a home of love,
from beautiful gardens that we have
I am from the warmth and coziness
of a beautiful country.
I am from roses and tulips
whose dark burgundy hair and delicate2 Comments
I liked how you used descriptive words so I, the reader, could picture the scenery in my mind. The best part I liked is how you closed your poem. “… from patience and from being successful, Dreaming and enjoying. I am from these moments. I am from this home of love.” I just thought it was cool because I could relate to that.
Munisa commented on the post, The Legitimacy of Artistic Careers
I love everything what you post about. It was interesting to me read about that what you write. I’m want to be artist so I heart about that the art is frowned upon. I’m totally agree with you.
The question that I choose is what life will I have in my future? I’m often thinking about this question, because I don’t know what will happen in my future, what good things will be or what not good. Nobody1 Comment
I was surprised to read the post about the future. It was awesome because of talk about “your future,” you are wondrous because you support yourself. You still thinking about your future that is helpful. We don’t know what is your future is gonna be, you have to find out on yourself.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ I’m always asking myself about my future, questions like what will I be” I think this is a good idea because… you have to find out what is your future is gonna be, nobody couldn’t find out what is your future, and nobody knows what is you won’t be
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what is your future gonna be, good luck
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I loved your poem I am interesting to know more about this poem.
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