Annika I think this topic is really cool. Lots of people know about the pollution of our atmosphere but not many people think about it's effects on the ocean. Good job!

Mayree I think this is a really interesting topic! Veganism is very popular right now but I don't know that much about the health benefits. I'm curious to see what other research you find. Good job!

I've always found the Salem witch trials really interesting. I'm curious to see what else you find oht about it, good job Mae

Olivia, so far your research is really great! Climate change is a very real and scary thing that seems hopeless. I'm curious to see what more you find out!

Louis, when I learned more about Trump's pick I too felt extremely concerned. I think that it is important to have someone who actually believes in helping our environment run the Environmental Protection Agency. I hope that Pruitt can look past his on skepticism and work with both Democrats...

I like how you acknowledge the many different types of broken homes. I think your idea to compare and contrast the different types could end up to be a really interesting essay. I think what you brought up about personality and behavior is interesting and definitely something that you...

I think that women's rights is a very important issue in America and I'm glad to see that more people are researching it! You're completely right that income inequality and dress codes are a problem that many women face, but it goes so much farther than that. Abbi left...

This is a really great poem, I loved how you compared how large space was with how large you felt the space was between you and that person. Really great job, I love your writing!

I actually liked the length of the poem, it conveyed the message without getting too messy. I really like the imagery in this poem, I felt as if I was in the crowd.

I agree, poverty is an issue that desperately needs to be addressed in the United States. The plans that you suggest are good ones in theory, but they are very expensive which is why they are so hard to implement realistically. I like your ideas, good job!

Dear Ricardo, I highly suggest that you read these articles that Olivia provided. Feminism is an important issue facing not only the United States but the entire world. The most reputable sources that you give in your post are youtubers and video games. Also, if you could give an...

Dear Kevin, Thank you for sharing your opinion, however this is much more than a black and white issue. You fail to mention women who are most likely going to die if they don't terminate their pregnancy, or women who are raped and are carrying their rapists baby. I...

I think this was really well written, you provided good evidence and used good examples. It's something that anyone can connect with, and makes people feel connected to the issue.

You did some really good research and did a good job of showing both points of view. You chose an interesting and original topic that not many people know about. Good job.