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    Nothing else to offer

    I am offering my love to you, since I have nothing else to offer. Keep it close like a frightened child, scared of the dark and monsters in the closet Keep it close like a fond memory, one too precious to lose. I love you, I...

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    • Dear Miriya,
      I am touched by your poem ” Nothing else to offer” because of the fact that you talked about love. The way you talked about love was very moving.
      One sentence that you wrote that stood out to me was, “I have nothing else to give you, 
      so it is a warm and comforting blanket” this stood out to me because when you give someone the love they deserve it is a comforting blanket that keeps us wrm and happy.
      Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because what I read was really moving and touching

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