No one is illegal because this is a free country and no one owns it in the first place.Based on the research, it is clear we need to change people’s opinions about immigrants because many are humans to
I liked reading your blog because it was super interesting and it was very clear that you wanted to make a change. I really liked your first quote a lot because it had statistics and you analized it pretty good as well and I liked the questions you wrote in your second paragraph a great start to a paragraph I think your work is very strong and hope to see more of your work.
I am move by the essay that was wrote “ Change your opinion on immigrants”, because it gave me information about the exact percent of how people feel about immigrants. I also, feel moved by it because what he stated about immigrants was right they should not be treated like animals because they are humans.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “No human is an animal because all are the same and no one should be treated differently”. I think this is a positive message because people need to know this especially for those that do not like immigrants. I feel like what he expressed gave a clear point the people who are treating immigrants like animals would not want to be treated the same .
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because what you stated out was explained well. I did not have difficulties understanding it because you were so broad about it. You jumped straight to the point and the fact you gave yourself supporting evidence made your writing even more exciting.
I was excited on reading your blog because the way you are talking about how immigrants are humans too. And how they need to have the same amount of rights as americans in the United States.One thing that I liked about your blog is that how you are able to support others. And something that you wrote is that you were talking about Donald Trump and he said that they are animals and you said that in reality that no one is a animaland I agree with you.Thank you for writing this blog this inspired me to support other immigrants and thank you very much for making this blog.
I like your poem and how it talks about love. The quote that i really like is, “We can’t buy true love” because that is so true and i believe in that to. If a person buys love then it is basically selling their happiness. Good job on your quote.
A question I have for you is why did you write this quote? (2) What inspired you?
One suggestion I have is that , in this quote you have, “The only way too put out Hate is with Love”. The “too” is wrong because it’s supposed to be with one “o”, so it’s “to” and not “too”.
Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was, “The only way too put out Hate is with Love” because i 100% agree with this line. I think this message needs to be spread throughout the world. I connect to your poem because i have realized that fake love is one of the most toxic things ever. Your poem also reminded me of a Martin Luther King Jr. quote, “Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that. Thank you so much for writing and I look forward to reading your next post.
I like your box because it has things like pictures of your family and cars.I also like sport cars and they are very cool.Another thing that I like about your box is that you had a small soccer field and I like soccer.I liked everything about your box.
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