You and your group chose to write about an interesting topic, i’m also writing about Police Brutality for my senior project. You should add a couple examples of how many people were abused by the police illegally.

Dear Gerardo,
You and your group chose to write about a important topic that is going on right now all over the United States. In fact, my senior project is based on Police Brutality also. I enjoyed reading your post because many people don’t really care about the topic Police Brutality and I also liked how you gave examples on what race is…[Read more]

Dear Victor,
I think this is a great topic to write about because everyone should get the same education as anyone else. I know a couple newcomers that don’t want to come to school no more because it’s hard for them to talk english. Like your group stated newcomers should have a chance to have conversations with their mentors 1 on 1. Thanks for…[Read more]

Dear Brayan,
I am unsure with your post, “Oakland: Drugs,” because Cannabis is medication for sick patients, cannabis doesn’t affect people in a bad way. Cannabis is actually better than prescribed pills because pills have a lot of ingredients and cannabis is natural.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “The story shows how marij…[Read more]

Dear Adrian,
I am thrilled about your post, “Gangs in Oakland,” because it brings back memories of my old friends joined gangs because of family problems, but I dont think its not only family problems, it’s also problems in schools. The reason why I left my friends is because i was they weren’t paying attention to me ,so I had to move on and…[Read more]

Dear Yasmin,
I am amazed by your post, “Drug Users Regret Using Drugs,” because in your post, you gave excellent information. When i read your post I remembered about me and my friend having a conversation on how he wants to stop doing drugs but he can’t.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Reed is trying to get other teens to do…[Read more]

Dear Hugo,
I am mesmerized by your letter “Drugs vs Teens” because when I read your letter it made me think about my friend that I use to go to school with. When I read your story I visualized myself being my friend because he skipped and missed days at school just to smoke marijuana with his parents money while they’re at work. Marijuana is pow…[Read more]

Dear Jeremiah khem,
I am thrilled by your post “The Procedure On Gun Control” because I agree with your talking about on they should make background checks on when buying a gun. I also agree on that on making it harder to buy a gun, so the wrong person won’t buy one. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “This law of selling guns…[Read more]

Dear Daisy Ramirez
I am amazed by your post “Minimum wage needs improvement” because I like how you gave a good detail on how why you need the minimum wage to improve. I also like when you said people come to America for a better life. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” The American Dream is according to Google definition, “the i…[Read more]