You and your group chose to write about an interesting topic, i’m also writing about Police Brutality for my senior project. You should add a couple examples of how many people were abused by the police illegally.
You and your group chose to write about a important topic that is going on right now all over the United States. In fact, my senior project is based on Police Brutality also. I enjoyed reading your post because many people don’t really care about the topic Police Brutality and I also liked how you gave examples on what race is…[Read more]
I think this is a great topic to write about because everyone should get the same education as anyone else. I know a couple newcomers that don’t want to come to school no more because it’s hard for them to talk english. Like your group stated newcomers should have a chance to have conversations with their mentors 1 on 1. Thanks for…[Read more]
Some reasons why Shakespeare is still studied in schools today is so the students could learn how English was used back then. They also studding it because english use to be more harder than english right now.
Some questions I answered to myself was what should I do? Should I do the comic strip or the miniature stage? Another question I asked myself was what can I add to the walls to make it more realistic? I
Othello: Nor scar that whiter skin of hers than snow and smooth as monumental alabaster. Yet she must die, else she’ll betray more men. Put out the light, and then put out the light. If I quench thee, thou f
Some reasons why Shakespeare is still studied in schools today is so students could see how hard was to use that language and so they could still be used. David in the video he said that Shakespeare invented over
I am unsure with your post, “Oakland: Drugs,” because Cannabis is medication for sick patients, cannabis doesn’t affect people in a bad way. Cannabis is actually better than prescribed pills because pills have a lot of ingredients and cannabis is natural.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “The story shows how marij…[Read more]
I am thrilled about your post, “Gangs in Oakland,” because it brings back memories of my old friends joined gangs because of family problems, but I dont think its not only family problems, it’s also problems in schools. The reason why I left my friends is because i was they weren’t paying attention to me ,so I had to move on and…[Read more]
I am amazed by your post, “Drug Users Regret Using Drugs,” because in your post, you gave excellent information. When i read your post I remembered about me and my friend having a conversation on how he wants to stop doing drugs but he can’t.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Reed is trying to get other teens to do…[Read more]
I am mesmerized by your letter “Drugs vs Teens” because when I read your letter it made me think about my friend that I use to go to school with. When I read your story I visualized myself being my friend because he skipped and missed days at school just to smoke marijuana with his parents money while they’re at work. Marijuana is pow…[Read more]
Dear Jeremiah khem,
I am thrilled by your post “The Procedure On Gun Control” because I agree with your talking about on they should make background checks on when buying a gun. I also agree on that on making it harder to buy a gun, so the wrong person won’t buy one. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “This law of selling guns…[Read more]
Dear Daisy Ramirez
I am amazed by your post “Minimum wage needs improvement” because I like how you gave a good detail on how why you need the minimum wage to improve. I also like when you said people come to America for a better life. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” The American Dream is according to Google definition, “the i…[Read more]
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
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