Hi Melody It’s Nacia and when looking at your post there was so many feelings excitement and pride because you mentioned things like animal abuse and The Animal Welfare Act because those aren´t things that are really paid attention to and itś nice to know someone is realizing it. Thank you for you post and I hope you continue to post.
Sincerely,
Nacia Russell

Alright Melody at first I was thought that the argument being made was incorrect but after the citations and evidence it seems you changed my mind. As animals are said to be protected but you well exsplain that the laws passed are not effective properly as lost animals are gone forever on drugs that may not work. It is a good topic that should be looked into more by other people. Nice work and I look foreword to more good arguments as this.

Really interesting and informative post Melody. Great citations and evidence being provided. Hope to seem more from you.

Dear melody, It Daniel. great post I really like how you expressed the feeling of animals abused. Really stand out to me. You did a great job on the blog really enjoyed it. can’t wait to read more blogs from you. Also great evidences. really supported your claim.

Dear Melody, I thought that this was a good post. I like how you say that just because animals can’t talk it gives you the right to abuse and kill them. I agree with this because I feels that animals shouldn’t be taken advantage of when since they are not able to stand up for themselves.

Melody, your post was well put together and helped me realize that this topic needs to be talked about more.

Very great job on the structure of your opinion. I really like how you brought up the topic of animal abuse. It makes it very strong.

Dear Joana,
I really like the fact that you were really detailed in your writing about the animal testing because animal testing is a big deal. Especially because scientists and doctors are killing them. “There are laws that protect animal cruelty” I like this quote because most people wouldn’t want to save the animals, they don’t care about the outer world they only care about themselves. One thing I think you should add is how do you think the people that were harming the animals will feel if they were the animals.

Dear Melody,
Your post is very intresting and draws alot of attention. Your point is well argued and you have avery great writing voice. Im glad you explained how animals should be protected becuase they are also a form of life. You also mentioned that they can not talk so they dont have the power to be able to advocate for themselves and have a say in what they want. Your post was very well written and I look foward to reading your next posts!

Dear Melody,
I like how you talked about how there is laws that protects animal cruelty. Thank you for your post and hope you keep on posting.
Sincerely,
Erika Romero

Dear Melody,

I’m impressed about your post because I like how you write about the topic of “I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals.” something that i liked about your post was when you said ” The reason that this is an important topic I chose to write about is that some people say that animal experimentation is beneficial to today’s discoveries and I couldn’t agree more but do people think about what happens behind the scenes that lead to finding that cure which is animal experimentation.” i agree with you and i like how you show so much care for this topic. And you’re analysis is so strong and is your information you give is interesting. Thank you for your post i enjoyed it and would like to hear more about you.

sincerely, paola H


Dear Melody
I’m very impressed with your level of work and how well you explained everything in your blog titled Animal experimentation = Animal cruelty. It really shows your understanding on the topic. It really expresses how you feel about animal testing. One line from your blog that standed out to me was “That way is why we are one day going to have less and less animals.” This quote standed out to me because its true if we continue our behavior one day we will run out of animals and then what are we going to do. Another line that standed out to me was “ This quote matters because it is saying that the medical field does abuse animals in animal experimentations. This quote is also saying how the data is irrelevant to human health.” This quote sticked out to me because it shows that the data that is collected is irrelevant which shows that animal testing is pointless to some point. I look forward to see some more of your work in the near future.

Dear Melody,
I am impressed about your post because I like how you wrote “I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals,” “Animal experimentation = Animal cruelty.” This is a vey important topic that should be discussed because although it is beneficial, people need to know the truth of animal testing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because it shows how much you care about this topic which this post will provide a deep analysis of animal cruelty. I also have the same topic and have my own blog. If you want to check it out, it is theanimalsaviors.wordpress.com. Thanks for your writing.

Wow i really like your post. I would love to read more. What a great story!

Thanks for your art. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because it is a very nice poster. I like the creativity behind the poster you made for the book about modern romance.

Dear Melody,

I am moved by your post, “Feed the Hungry not the Streets” because you provide a lot of detail and your argument is very strong because of that. Homelessness is a very big issue happening in the world and I like how you explain that no one should be left without food or shelter, no matter what. I like the statistics you provided because they show the severity of this issue and how fast it is and has been growing. Lastly, I admire the way you talked about different possible causes for homelessness because it really strengthened your argument.

Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

Dear Melody,

I am interested by your post, “Feed the Hungry not the Streets,” because you provide a really unique and different approach to the causes and solutions of homelessness. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Some people are so addicted to drugs that they spend most of their money on drugs when that money should’ve gone to their rent and bills.” I think this is true because aside from financial and family issues, drugs play a huge role in the homeless population. People on drugs spend a lot of money to satisfy their addiction even if it means going broke or isolation from family and friends. Another sentence that I liked was: “The first step of action I believe we should take to end homelessness is having empathy towards people who are having a hard time.” This stood out for me because again, it was a very different from most solutions. Aside from what we can physically do to help, as you mentioned, we should first change our emotional attitude towards those without homes. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

I really enjoyed reading your post and if in any way possible, I hope to collaborate with you one day. If you are interested, come by and check out my blogs dealing with homelessness in NYC. I would love to hear your feedback.

Link –> https://homesfortomorrowcom.wordpress.com/

Dear, Melody I really like your box because it’s really creative. I agree with you that family is everything and I much love you have for your family. Also we both Latina ayy lit.

Dear Melody,
I really like your box and your counter narrative about your box. I agree with you that family is everything to you. I also agree with you about growing up without your father and I can relate to you about that since my father left me when I was younger. Other things I agree with you is about being a student and also about Latina.

Hi this is Jorge from Fremont HIgh School. I have noticed that your shadow box looks amazing and I like how you put tons of pictures of family because that’s important. Keep up the good work.

Hi this is Julio from Fremont High School. I saw your shadowbox and looks amazing and I like how you make it, I like that you put all that pictures of your family and of yourself. Good work!

Dear, Melody I like how you have very nice transitions and how your artist statement isn’t very linear so it’s creative way of explaining your identities.

Dear, Melody I’m a student from Life academy I really like how you explain your shadow box because it has a lot of details about you and your family and I feel that really important in everyones life.

Dear Melody,
I am moved by your post “Me,myself and I” because it was very detailed and you really explained parts of your identity. One part of your statement that stands out to me is when you placed pictures of people you love because it just means you really care about them. Another part that liked was when you described your ethnicity you said you are proud of being Mexican. Thanks for your shadow box and shadow box statement. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because you did a good job on describing everything you are proud of and it just made everything more interesting.

Dear Melody,

Your article “Me, myself, and I ” is outstanding, and the sensory deatils used in your post really helps the reader and enabled me to imagine your story in my mind. I also enjoyed the fact that I can connect to your article because being a Mexican American is not easy and stereotypes affect the way we are viewed but I admire your endurance to not give up and keep on being yourself despite many people trying to affect the way you are. I am loooking forward to seeing what you post next.

Dear Melody,
Here are three questions to further your thinking. How do the images in your box show your struggles and inspirations? Have you ever traveleed to Mexico? Can living under a certain environment change a person?.

dear melody,I really like your box its really colorful and showing about what makes you,you i also liked your sayings really powerful words i liked when you said ¨fear is not a person its a feeling and feelings go away¨ i connected to that and it was nice.