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  • Dear Alex
    thank you for the great encouraging words. I’m glad that my point of view was also alike in what you believe.

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    I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals. The reason that this is an important topic I chose to write about is that some people say that

    Animal experimentation = Animal cruelty

    I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals. The reason that this is an important topic I chose to write about is that some people say that animal...

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    • Hi Melody It’s Nacia and when looking at your post there was so many feelings excitement and pride because you mentioned things like animal abuse and The Animal Welfare Act because those aren´t things that are really paid attention to and itś nice to know someone is realizing it. Thank you for you post and I hope you continue to post.
      Sincerely,
      Nacia Russell

    • Alright Melody at first I was thought that the argument being made was incorrect but after the citations and evidence it seems you changed my mind. As animals are said to be protected but you well exsplain that the laws passed are not effective properly as lost animals are gone forever on drugs that may not work. It is a good topic that should be looked into more by other people. Nice work and I look foreword to more good arguments as this.

    • Really interesting and informative post Melody. Great citations and evidence being provided. Hope to seem more from you.

    • Dear melody, It Daniel. great post I really like how you expressed the feeling of animals abused. Really stand out to me. You did a great job on the blog really enjoyed it. can’t wait to read more blogs from you. Also great evidences. really supported your claim.

    • Dear Melody, I thought that this was a good post. I like how you say that just because animals can’t talk it gives you the right to abuse and kill them. I agree with this because I feels that animals shouldn’t be taken advantage of when since they are not able to stand up for themselves.

    • Melody, your post was well put together and helped me realize that this topic needs to be talked about more.

    • Very great job on the structure of your opinion. I really like how you brought up the topic of animal abuse. It makes it very strong.

    • Dear Joana,
      I really like the fact that you were really detailed in your writing about the animal testing because animal testing is a big deal. Especially because scientists and doctors are killing them. “There are laws that protect animal cruelty” I like this quote because most people wouldn’t want to save the animals, they don’t care about the outer world they only care about themselves. One thing I think you should add is how do you think the people that were harming the animals will feel if they were the animals.

    • Dear Melody,
      Your post is very intresting and draws alot of attention. Your point is well argued and you have avery great writing voice. Im glad you explained how animals should be protected becuase they are also a form of life. You also mentioned that they can not talk so they dont have the power to be able to advocate for themselves and have a say in what they want. Your post was very well written and I look foward to reading your next posts!

    • Dear Melody,
      I like how you talked about how there is laws that protects animal cruelty. Thank you for your post and hope you keep on posting.
      Sincerely,
      Erika Romero

    • Dear Melody,

      I’m impressed about your post because I like how you write about the topic of “I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals.” something that i liked about your post was when you said ” The reason that this is an important topic I chose to write about is that some people say that animal experimentation is beneficial to today’s discoveries and I couldn’t agree more but do people think about what happens behind the scenes that lead to finding that cure which is animal experimentation.” i agree with you and i like how you show so much care for this topic. And you’re analysis is so strong and is your information you give is interesting. Thank you for your post i enjoyed it and would like to hear more about you.

      sincerely, paola H

    • Dear Melody
      I’m very impressed with your level of work and how well you explained everything in your blog titled Animal experimentation = Animal cruelty. It really shows your understanding on the topic. It really expresses how you feel about animal testing. One line from your blog that standed out to me was “That way is why we are one day going to have less and less animals.” This quote standed out to me because its true if we continue our behavior one day we will run out of animals and then what are we going to do. Another line that standed out to me was “ This quote matters because it is saying that the medical field does abuse animals in animal experimentations. This quote is also saying how the data is irrelevant to human health.” This quote sticked out to me because it shows that the data that is collected is irrelevant which shows that animal testing is pointless to some point. I look forward to see some more of your work in the near future.

      • Dear Alex
        thank you for the great encouraging words. I’m glad that my point of view was also alike in what you believe.

    • Dear Melody,
      I am impressed about your post because I like how you wrote “I believe that animal experimentation is the same thing as animal cruelty depending on how they treat the animals,” “Animal experimentation = Animal cruelty.” This is a vey important topic that should be discussed because although it is beneficial, people need to know the truth of animal testing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because it shows how much you care about this topic which this post will provide a deep analysis of animal cruelty. I also have the same topic and have my own blog. If you want to check it out, it is theanimalsaviors.wordpress.com. Thanks for your writing.

  • Dear, Genesis
    My name is Melody and I am a freshman at Life Academy. I read your writing titled “Why I’m Different as Hell” it was very interesting and it caught my attention because I often find myself wondering the same things I can really relate to a lot of things that you said. Feedback that I have for you for the future is to proof…Read More

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    Melody commented on the post, My Name Memoir

    Dear, Jimmy
    My name is Melody and I am a freshman at life academy. I read your memoir it was very good I really liked how you explained that you never had a nickname that stuck around for a long time. I can’t relate to that because i’ve had a nickname since I was a baby and it’s stuck around for a really long time. I also agree with you about…Read More

  • Dear, Angel
    My name is Melody I am a freshman at life academy. I read your memoir and I wanna say that I can relate to your story about nicknames because in my family we are really big on nicknames mostly everyone in my family has a nickname and I know how special that can be. I really enjoyed reading your name memoir because it was…Read More

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