Hi Grace, This is an interesting approach to take in how sports can affect you. I've usually only seen all the evidence that points to sports being good for your mental health, but being able to see the other side of the coin is good as well. For example if...

Lucky, I think it's great that you're interested in the army and how well it works. It's true it is very strict because it's designed to teach you discipline and respect. It's also interesting that you're thinking of these high level questions about the military. For example, "are mental health...

Hi Emmanuela, I really liked your approach to finding the deeper meaning in rap lyrics. I listen to rap as well and I like it because I'm able to find the deeper meaning in it's lyrics. On some levels it can relate to your own life when they rap about...

https://www.firstcoastnews.com/article/news/dozens-help-beaches-go-green-clean-up-atlantic-and-neptune-beaches/77-585596496

Hi Celeste, I think this is a really cool project that focuses on caring about other people. Teen pregnancy is a topic that we as a society tend to shy away from or look down upon so I'm glad you're doing something to help teen moms get the resources...

Wendy, This poem was very good and I think the concept you chose to write about is interesting. We never really remeber all the firsts we’ve had in our life just bits and peices. I especially like the end where you said, “She doesn’t remeber this but her life could...

https://www.va.gov/opa/publications/celebrate/eagle.pdf

The American Bald Eagle

Nathaniel, Your take on eagles and how they relate to freedom was a very interesting one. I do agree that eagles are a symbol for freedom in America but inferring what people think based on what they say is not a very good way to support your evidence. Here's...

Jillian, I really like that chose such a heavy topic to talk about. It's great that women are able to talk about things that have happened to them in environment that's getting better about talking about these issues. I think it also important that you said men can be...

Hyper link doesn't work here's the regular link: https://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/love-hate-relationship-0

Brian, I really liked this poem because I can relate to some of things you're talking about. For example when you say, "My love is school because I hate school. " I can agree. I hate school but my whole entire life revolves around school and is for school...

Johnny, I like that you brought this topic to light. The recent school shootings that have been happening are devastating and I'm glad to see them taking more precocious measures like "students wear clear backpacks." But I also don't think the best way to stop violence is to bring...

I liked the quote, "I believe that a negative mind will never give you a positive life." because it just reaffirms your point that we need to start thinking positive and remove everything negative in our lives. Here's an article on how to free your mind that I thought you...

Here's a link to another poem about being materialistic you might like. https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/materialism-8/

I forgot to put this quote in my comment that I liked, “It is unrealistic and inhumane to deport these individuals from their families and lives in the United States. These immigrants should be offered a path to legal status and eventually earned citizenship.” https://www.migrationpolicy.org/article/frequently-requested-statistics-immigrants-and-immigration-united-states

Noemi, I really like this positive outlook you have on life. It can be hard to think positive when there's bad things around you, but as you said, you have to persevere and keep going even when it gets hard. I'm sorry that you had to let go of...

Juan, I thought this poem was beautiful and gave insight into the true meaning of love. I liked the part about your house not being able to visit you in the hospital. A lot of times we think about all the things we've bought or need to buy and...

Patricia, This is a very interesting topic you chose. Immigration is a very touchy subject so I'm glad you took the time to talk about it. I think the article makes two valid point. Many immigrants did come illegally but it's wrong for us to just throw them out...

Amani, I really liked this article and thought it was supper interesting. I agree with you that violent video games contribute will contribute to angry or violent feelings. I think that these feeling can contribute violent acts but are not the sole cause of these violent acts. It made...

Hi Ronaysi, I like that you talked about Childish Gambino's music video and how it connects to violence in America. I have also watched the music video and really like how he showed how all these horrible things are happening in our world yet the media tries to make everyone...