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  • MarthaG
  • Oakland, California, USA
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Why Not? View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • April 3, 2019

Dear Naveen, I am impressed by your poem, “why not?,” because it features your opinions on why it is ok to just spend money on a game because it is allowing you to have fun. I believe this is a strong paragraph because you are showing how it is reasonable...

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The path of Immigration View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • February 6, 2019

Your welcome!!! keep up the great work!

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Eyes View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • January 30, 2019

Thank you, I know my poem is great heheheheheheheheheheh but thank you for reading and I just knew that it would be great in poem jsut read your poem and yours was creative and awesome 5 STARS! your great!

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Oakland View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • January 30, 2019

Thank you, I think your comment was very clear for me to understand the great things about my blog.

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Oakland View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • January 30, 2019

Thank you for reading my blog. Your blog is amazing too. I found it interesting you found that part outstanding.

Dear, cece I believe you have a strong assertion because you back it up with strong evidence like the one from Voynovskaya. I think your paragraph is very strong because you also have a interesting topic. I think the question you ask in your conclusion is a great question. Keep...

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The path of Immigration View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • January 9, 2019

Dear, Evelin You did an unbelievable job at writing this. I love how you introduced the interviewee because you added good important information, this helps me add more information over my interviewees next time. I think you could’ve added more analysis about the quotes you chose. But I do believe...

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Love is a Game View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • December 7, 2018

Dear Teresa, I believe you did an excellent job on your poem because it made me feel like I was going through that experience and actually made me feel like I was experiencing the story of the poem. I know that made your poem really strong, also the last...

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Anahi´s Shadow Box View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • October 24, 2018

Dear Anahi, I love your shadow box, how you wanted to represent your culture by adding the mexican flag colors in your shadow box. The little details make your shadow box amazing. Thanks for your great piece of art and writing!

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My Shadow Box View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • October 24, 2018

Thank you, your shadow box was also very Radical! I appreciate your feedback!

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My Shadow Box By Ulises Almanza View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • October 10, 2018

Dear, Ulises One sentence that stood out to me in your artist statement was when you stated you wanted society to see you as a good brother that’s really adorable. To add on, another sentence that stood out to me was when you wanted to have no F’s and I...

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Ariana’s Shadow Box View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • October 10, 2018

Dear Ariana, One sentence that stood out to me was how you added pictures of your childhood it shows your family. It also shows me how you are showing that your family is important to you. Another part that I liked was the colors of your box made it...

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My True Identity: Adrian Kelly View Comment
  • @MarthaG
  • September 14, 2018

Dear Adrian, I am admirable by your shadow box, “My True Identity” because you show your true identity through your shadow box. I like how you put your identity out there and your not afraid of being judged because of it, you show this through your shadow box. Another part...

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