• I really liked your question and the research you have gathered so far. I thought it was really interesting to see if a maximalist or minimalist shoe would be better for you in the long run. It makes a lot of sense that the minimalist shoe would prevent injury and help maximize your training.

  • wow! this is amazing 🙂 and so true. Its crazy how people will spend hundreds of dollars to buy a brand. Brands influence fame, popularity and wealth and is very important to many people for their self image. I think your topic is really interesting!

  • Have you ever been in a situation where you have felt uneasy because of the presence of a stranger who is asking for help. Have you ever walked down a street and seen a man, woman or child begging for money? Have

  • Question/topic: How has homelessness evolved in Salt Lake City the last 50 years? Who were the homeless in 1967? How did they become homeless and how and what happened to create an extraordinary growing number of

  • Question/topic: How has homelessness evolved in Salt Lake City the last 50 years? Who were the homeless in 1967? How did they become homeless and how and what happened to create an extraordinary growing number of

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    Question/topic: How has homelessness evolved in Salt Lake City the last 50 years? Who were the homeless in 1967? How did they become homeless and how and what happened to create an extraordinary growing number

  • Mayree,
    I think your topic is really interesting and a topic that will result in a good paper! I also think that the research you’ve done so far is really resourceful and to me makes your topic even more interesting.

  • I agree with what Seiji and Jack said! I think this topic will do you well but I also feel it will be challenging at times. Your topic is super interesting and I find it really intriguing to see our generation/ Society go crazy for some brands. Im excited to see the completed piece.

  • Marren posted an update 5 months, 1 week ago

    For my research paper I chose the topic of homelessness in Salt Lake City and how people become homeless and also how that varies through cultures/ societies change. Gale, a research website, gave me a ton of useful information but I did struggle to find a specific article answering my question. But the most useful articles I found were full of…

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  • Hey! I think your topic is really interesting and I think that you presented it really well! It might be a little difficult, I say this only because, like you said the topic is very controversial and opinionated. I think you picked a really good topic and I can’t wait to see your complete piece of writing!

  • I also agree that this article was really interesting! I liked that you had research backing up your information! I also liked how you connected this piece with how it effects us in our everyday lives. I’d love to see this research/ topic expand and become a complete piece of writing! I think your choice in this topic was a good one.

  • Marren commented on the post, Coral 7 months, 3 weeks ago

    I really enjoyed this poem! I thought it was so cool that you put so much meaning into a simple object like coral. I liked how when I first started reading your poem I was thinking of a boring piece of coral floating around seabeds, but as I finished I saw the coral in a totally different perspective. What a cool poem!!

  • Marren commented on the post, School Uniforms 8 months ago

    Great article! Like many others have said I agree that uniforms can be hard for some but I greatly think that uniforms are awesome! I’ve been wearing a uniform since freshman year and I love it. I went to public school for most of the school year and to me picking out clothes in mornings was the most stressful thing ever! Also I felt more pressure…[Read more]

  • Marren commented on the post, Rice Pudding 8 months ago

    I love your poem! This also made me really hungry! I loved how you tied your life in explaining rice pudding! This poem really brought out the importance of rice pudding and explained the meaning rice pudding bring to yo , which I think is really important. You did a really good job! Awesome prom!

  • I also agree that hard work can help you accomplish many great things, but just like Allie said I think there is always some talent involved.

  • Well Said! I also agree with you and the fact that if we improve your environment it will help improve many other problems we have globally. I also think that our planet is the most important thing, mostly because it makes it possible for us to exist and I defiantly think it should be our first priority in all discussions.

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  • Along with making decisions for college I’ve faced many thoughts and questions on my future living conditions. There’s a huge part of me that would love to stay at home in Salt Lake City. I mostly feel this way

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