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Dear Sam, Thank you so much for taking time to read our proposal? We greatly appreciate your comment and the feedback you have given us. We have not yet looked into an app that can locate the traffickers but now that you mention this method would very beneficial for the...

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Shut Up View Comment
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  • April 3, 2019

Dear Elijah, I am very happy with your poem, shut up because I agree with you how Donald Trump should just shut up since most things he says are riduculous anyways. To me the main message of your poem is how Donald Trump is an oppressive degrading person. I know...

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Do The Police Deserve Our Trust View Comment
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  • February 3, 2019

Dear Yasmin, I am so happy that I got to read your amazing and informative blog because you used real life situations to help support your writing which made your blog so much stronger! One sentence you wrote that stood out for me was: “This affects the young community because...

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OUSD and Problems View Comment
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  • February 3, 2019

Dear Valerie I am very thankful for you contributing to the youth voices community with your great blog! Your writing really stood out to me because you wrote some very convincing arguments that I also agree with. For example, one sentence you wrote that stood out for me is, “This is...

Thank you so much for reading my blog. The Part of your comment that stood out to me was "it was super interesting and it was very clear as well". A question I have for you is what was your favorite part of my blog? Look forward to back!

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OUSD and Problems View Comment
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  • January 15, 2019

Dear Valerie, Thank you so much for writing this blog for your classmates to be able to learn from you and all the research that you did!!!! A line that really stood out to me is "This is clearly showing that not only is it affecting the students but...

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Alcoholism View Comment
  • @MarleniR
  • December 12, 2018

Dear Oswaldo, Your poem is a very personal story and I really appreciate you sharing it with our class. I like how you connected love to an addiction that will cause you to do crazy things. I could really see where you used the different literary devices! One thing you...

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My shadow box View Comment
  • @MarleniR
  • October 24, 2018

Dear Tania, Your shadow box is really beautiful. I like how you incorporated many pictures and objects to express your counter narratives. One sentence that you wrote that stood out to me was, “On the outside I had also put red paper to represent how society thinks we are part...

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My Shadow box View Comment
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  • October 17, 2018

Dear Kenya, Your shadow box is really beautiful. I like how you incorporated many pictures and objects to express your counter narratives. One sentence that you wrote that stood out to me was, “I choose to try my hardest and never give up.” That sentence stood out to me because...

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Breaking the Dominant Narrative View Comment
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  • September 14, 2018

Dear Natalie, I am very surprised on how beautiful your box is because I love all the color you incorporated into it. I like the fact that each symbol means something to you and who you are. from, Marleni.

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