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  • Orange Cove, California, USA
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    What is posted online can reduce others’ confidence and self-esteem. It may also result in suicides. What students post online can affect people dramatically even if those were not the intentions. We just never

    Students' online speech should be limited

    What is posted online can reduce others' confidence and self-esteem. It may also result in suicides. What students post online can affect people dramatically even if those were not the intentions. We just never know how people are going...

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    • Dear Marisol:

      I am very intrigued by your post, “Students online speech should be limited” because I can agree with how you provided information about how students online speech can cause negative effects towards other people. It is kind of devastating the online bullying is occuring and no stoppage has been reinforced.

      One sentence that stands out for me is “Students’ online speech should be limited because what is posted online can reduce the confidence of others.” I believe that with this quote, you basically summarized all your post because a negative comment can do so much and affect others in negative way no matter how old someone is.

      Thanks for this informative writing. I will love to see another of your posts soon because I like the way you backup your thoughts with evidence. I would like to see where you got this information from but overall, great post!

      Juan

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    In the book The Afterlife by Gary Soto is about how a young boy gets killed in his high school bathroom. He then goes on to experience the world as a ghost, then finds out that he falls in love.

    The boy’s n

    The Afterlife

    In the book The Afterlife by Gary Soto is about how a young boy gets killed in his high school bathroom. He then goes on to experience the world as a ghost, then finds out that he falls in...

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    • Dear Marisol,
      I am intrigued by your post because it states about the killing taking place in Fresno. I did not know this book was solely based on a murder near my hometown.

    • Dear Marisol,

      I think that a book written from the perspective of a ghost would be very interesting. I wonder if he is able to interact with the people who are alive and if he can convey messages to them. The thought of an afterlife is one that has been on my mind for a long time and I think an interesting book like this would be able to open my mind to it more than before.

    • And…what is this about…not being rude about it😊

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    Dear, Abi
    I definitely agree with you I think that beauty is not how you look but how happy you feel about yourself. Girls everywhere are taught that you have to look a certain way to be beautiful and they are

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