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Mario commented on the post, A Night/Gloomy Morning In NYC
Dear Drew:
I am happy with your poem , “A Night/Gloomy Morning In Nyc,” because I like mornings and nights in NYC. Also, you used beautiful words.
One line that stands out for me is, “The moonlight bounces off the empty street.”. I think this line is striking because I thought about moonlight bouncing like a basketball.
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Read MoreHigh up, a hop up Manhattan, is the heights, It’s where all the Spanish people live. I like it, I love it, I live it. Spanish is all on the signs. The Heights is like the Dominican Republic of Manhattan. People surprised when a...
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Read Morealliteration is repetition of sounds. she using h and h here and other same starting letters throughout like g g and c c.
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Read MoreIt is not true because fonny lives on the west side and crime scene happened on east side maybe officers bell wrongly accused fonny because he was paid to have him arrested because skin color
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Read MoreFonny is upset that the lawyer that tish and fonny father hired is not doing anything to get him out of. Jail therefore he is frustrated because he don’t want to be in jail for long time so...
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Dear Mario,
I am amused by your poem, “High up in the Heights” because I feel like you made the reader visualize what it was like to be there. Also because you showed how you feel about being there. One line that stands out for me is, “It’s where all the Spanish people live. I like it, I love it, I live it. Spanish is all on the signs.” I think these lines are powerful because you are talking about the beautiful culture that you will see when walking into the heights. Your poem helps me understand what walking around the heights is like. You described The things you can do there and emotions you can feel. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next.