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Maria commented on the post, My life as a kid
Dear Carlos:
I am so surprised with your writing, the way of expressing your writing been in a place without understanding the language.
One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is that you respect your parents the same as I do.
Another sentence that caught my attention was that you watched cartoons as a child because I feel like we did…Read More -
An advice I will say is that my favorite is Not trusting friends no matter how long you have been friends with them.
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Read MoreI am made of gardening with my grandparents in their small town in Dominican Republic I am made of being the first to get up out of my family I am made of getting us to a new country in 2nd...
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I like the organization and repetition in the poem. You do a good job with rhyme and expressing yourself. I like the way all of the unique things in your life are expressed. The only thing I would say to improve is to use better word choice.