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I was a little confused when you said "To address this issue, we think that police should have to go through therapy before being able to join the police force to make sure they are both mentally and emotionally fit." What do you mean by this? Do you suggest...
I would fix the link you have, since you can't click on it. I was able to look at the piktochart, and the evidence provided was a good start, but you should also give the reader the article title to those facts you have on there. The thesis in...
Your evidence and facts are really good when it talks about your topic for nuclear weapons. I couldn't really find a thesis to this, so it was kind of confusing for me to understand. I would suggest piecing what you got from your evidence and solutions into making a...