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    Maria commented on the post, Where I'm from

    Dear munisa,
    I loved your poem I am interesting to know more about this poem.
    by Maria Malik

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    I am from a pink hijab and pink sneakers, from colorful fabric from Telco and praying at home during Ramadan on my green prayer rug.

    I am from the beautiful white color house

    I am from green, pink, white, and

    Where I'm From

    I am from a pink hijab and pink sneakers, from colorful fabric from Telco and praying at home during Ramadan on my green prayer rug. I am from the beautiful white color house I...

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    • Estimada Maria:

      Estoy asombrada por tu poema, “De donde soy,” porque aprendí de una cultura nueva que nunca había escuchado. Yo soy de El Salvador y vivo en California.

      Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es “De mi padre, Pervez diciendo: ‘Es hora de ir a la cama, Maria’ y mi madre Tanzeela diciendo ‘Es peligroso afuera’” porque muchos de los papas de mi comunidad les dicen las mismas cosas a sus hijos. Veo que somos muy diferentes de algunas maneras, pero iguales en otras maneras.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quiero aprender mas sobre tu cultura. Cual es tu tradición favorita?

      Monica

    • Nice poem, Maria.Your writing has great flow

    • I appreciate the colors and illustrations you used to highlight your poetry. Your voice was clear and well paced so you were easy to listen to. I noticed you had background music but your voice carried the message well. Nice job!

  • Dear lining:
    I am happy to read your story because some people want to get a good job and get more knowledge in college. I am interested in to know more about why people want to go college.

    Maria Malik

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    What will I want to be when I grow up? I have a dream to become a teacher and my parents have the dream that I become doctor. I know more about teacher because when I was little I have so many different types of

    "Never Good Enough' for Mom and Dad"

    What will I want to be when I grow up? I have a dream to become a teacher and my parents have the dream that I become doctor. I know more about teacher because when I was little I...

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  • Dear Luyao,
    Thanks for this poem about the beautiful beach. I really like how you describe each word about beach because it was good story.
    I can’t wait to see more of your story.

    Maria Malik

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