Some advantages of sharing your identity in a powtoon format is it help you to make a good video by adding writing and media with voices. The challenges are how to make perfect video about your timeline. I deal those challenges today by add different pictures and songs with voices.
Estoy asombrada por tu poema, “De donde soy,” porque aprendí de una cultura nueva que nunca había escuchado. Yo soy de El Salvador y vivo en California.
Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es “De mi padre, Pervez diciendo: ‘Es hora de ir a la cama, Maria’ y mi madre Tanzeela diciendo ‘Es peligroso afuera’” porque muchos de los papas de mi comunidad les dicen las mismas cosas a sus hijos. Veo que somos muy diferentes de algunas maneras, pero iguales en otras maneras.
Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quiero aprender mas sobre tu cultura. Cual es tu tradición favorita?
What will I want to be when I grow up? I have a dream to become a teacher and my parents have the dream that I become doctor. I know more about teacher because when I was little I have so many different types of
The space is beautiful. There is clean road and when I enter neighbor house they have so clean house. I belong to this space by my neighborhood live near at my house. My purpose in this space is my neighbor and m
Your writing is so real but beautiful and peaceful. I like your writing for you show the life so close to us, and I can understand you better after reading your writing. After all, writing is a communication on paper. Hope I can read more of your writing so I can understand you more and more.
I am interesting in your neighborhood your post because I never go to the GRAVESEND that why I should look go around in Brooklyn.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “my family they become good friends because my neighbor speak Urdu and my family too so is easy to communicate with them. ” I think this is good because EG- In my neighborhood speak English and Spanish but my mother can’t too much speak English and also she can’t speak Spanish. So she can’t communicated with them.
Another sentence that I like is “We enjoy with our neighbor so much and sometime we eat together. Also, we go sometime park, grocery, and shopping store. This stood out for me because it’s really nice.
Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I need to more communicate with my neighborhood. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like about your neighborhood and your writing is clear to reading.
I am interested in learning about Education because it give you a lot of knowledge and teach you so many different things. If I could design my own class, it would be different ideas if student to let other student know. Reading and student different story gets me really excited because it is interested.
I am interested your post, “Me, Immigration and Justice,”because you said you want to become a good person and help other people to let them stay healthy.One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is In the future, I would like to be a pharmacist because I want all the people in the world to be healthy. I dream of becoming a…[Read more]
My name is Maria Malik and I was born in 2001 at Peshawar, Pakistan. I am 17 years old. I have lived in Brooklyn for 4 years with my family. In school, I like to study different types of subjects and learn
my neighbors are nice to us because we go sometime their house and they come to our house. I wish i could change is that more nice with my neighborhood and support them and also help them.If someone visited to our neighborhood i guest at first is gonna hard to meet them but if we spend time together and share food talking about past then is going…[Read more]
QINGHONG WU and I are both students.
I am from Pakistan,but Qinghong is from China. I am 17 years old However, Qinghong is 14 years old. Qinghong and I was very different from each other because we have different Culture, Language, and Religion.
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.