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  • maria.malik
  • Brooklyn, New York, USA
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    Maria commented on the post, Where I'm from

    Dear munisa,
    I loved your poem I am interesting to know more about this poem.
    by Maria Malik

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    I am from a pink hijab and pink sneakers, from colorful fabric from Telco and praying at home during Ramadan on my green prayer rug.

    I am from the beautiful white color house

    I am from green, pink, white, and

    Where I'm From

    I am from a pink hijab and pink sneakers, from colorful fabric from Telco and praying at home during Ramadan on my green prayer rug. I am from the beautiful white color house I am from green, pink, white, and yellow...

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    • Estimada Maria:

      Estoy asombrada por tu poema, “De donde soy,” porque aprendí de una cultura nueva que nunca había escuchado. Yo soy de El Salvador y vivo en California.

      Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es “De mi padre, Pervez diciendo: ‘Es hora de ir a la cama, Maria’ y mi madre Tanzeela diciendo ‘Es peligroso afuera’” porque muchos de los papas de mi comunidad les dicen las mismas cosas a sus hijos. Veo que somos muy diferentes de algunas maneras, pero iguales en otras maneras.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quiero aprender mas sobre tu cultura. Cual es tu tradición favorita?

      Monica

    • Nice poem, Maria.Your writing has great flow

    • I appreciate the colors and illustrations you used to highlight your poetry. Your voice was clear and well paced so you were easy to listen to. I noticed you had background music but your voice carried the message well. Nice job!

  • Dear lining:
    I am happy to read your story because some people want to get a good job and get more knowledge in college. I am interested in to know more about why people want to go college.

    Maria Malik

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    What will I want to be when I grow up? I have a dream to become a teacher and my parents have the dream that I become doctor. I know more about teacher because when I was little I have so many different types of

    "Never Good Enough' for Mom and Dad"

    What will I want to be when I grow up? I have a dream to become a teacher and my parents have the dream that I become doctor. I know more about teacher because when I was little I...

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  • Dear Luyao,
    Thanks for this poem about the beautiful beach. I really like how you describe each word about beach because it was good story.
    I can’t wait to see more of your story.

    Maria Malik

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    The space is beautiful. There is clean road and when I enter neighbor house they have so clean house. I belong to this space by my neighborhood live near at my house. My purpose in this space is my neighbor and m

    My neighborhood is gravesend

    The space is beautiful. There is clean road and when I enter neighbor house they have so clean house. I belong to this space by my neighborhood live near at my house. My purpose in this space is my neighbor and...

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    • Your writing is so real but beautiful and peaceful. I like your writing for you show the life so close to us, and I can understand you better after reading your writing. After all, writing is a communication on paper. Hope I can read more of your writing so I can understand you more and more.

    • your writing is and the picture is so beautiful I like how it looks like the space is clean.
      I like how your characterized is surprised to see that it is very clean.

    • Dear Maria,
      I am interesting in your neighborhood your post because I never go to the GRAVESEND that why I should look go around in Brooklyn.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “my family they become good friends because my neighbor speak Urdu and my family too so is easy to communicate with them. ” I think this is good because EG- In my neighborhood speak English and Spanish but my mother can’t too much speak English and also she can’t speak Spanish. So she can’t communicated with them.
      Another sentence that I like is “We enjoy with our neighbor so much and sometime we eat together. Also, we go sometime park, grocery, and shopping store. This stood out for me because it’s really nice.
      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I need to more communicate with my neighborhood. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really like about your neighborhood and your writing is clear to reading.

      Sincerely
      May

  • Dear Lining:

    I am interested your post, “Me, Immigration and Justice,”because you said you want to become a good person and help other people to let them stay healthy.One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is In the future, I would like to be a pharmacist because I want all the people in the world to be healthy. I dream of becoming a…Read More

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    My name is Maria Malik and I was born in 2001 at Peshawar, Pakistan. I am 17 years old. I have lived in Brooklyn for 4 years with my family. In school, I like to study different types of subjects and learn

    Me, Immigration and Justice

    MariaMalik My name is Maria Malik and I was born in 2001 at Peshawar, Pakistan. I am 17 years old. I have lived in Brooklyn for 4 years with my family. In school, I like to study different types of...

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