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Malcolm commented on the post, What makes a good parent?
Coleman I really like this essay. It is a very good example of how to analyze a poem. My favorite parts of the essay are when you go back and forth between lines in the poem and relating them back to the author’s real life problems or situations that you think the poem is highlighting. I also like your good use of transitions and I feel good…Read More
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Dear Keeba:
I am really happy with your poem, “The Rec,” because it made me feel whole. The rec is a place a lot of people need to experience and visit not literally but there should be recs everywhere. A place where everyone can just have fun and be themselves regardless of their situations can be really helpful for a lot of people.
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He hears it and is hookedOver the ideas forming in his head above the headphonesOver the cadence building louder and louderOver the constant “you ready?”Voices replay in his headSay it louder!Do it over!I’m not
Read MoreHe hears it and is hookedOver the ideas forming in his head above the headphonesOver the cadence building louder and louderOver the constant “you ready?”Voices replay in his headSay it louder!Do it over!I'm not leaving until you get this...
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I love how you explained it and gave details
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Malcolm commented on the post, When My Life Change for the Better
Dear ahlexus:
I am Happy with your description for your pictures of the park. The story is heartwarming.One part of your that stands out for me is where you mention the part about you first seeing your boyfriend for the first time and how you felt like you were going to explode. It stood out to me because I can definitely relate and I’m sure a…Read More -
Malcolm commented on the post, Cha-ri-ssa!
Dear Charissa:
I am in agreement with your bio and feel that I can relate because I also go to harvest and have picked up on some of the things that you have. Being that I’ve been here for a little longer I’ve had more time to get adjusted but your doing fine and you’ll be good.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Yes, I find it…Read More - Load More Posts
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I love how well you described this happy place you so call. Its like i can vision my self there.