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  • Isaac,
    I love this topic, my government class just finished discussing this. What is your stance on lobbying? Do you have a solution? Although lobbying is legal, I agree with Hailey, there should be more restrictions. Lobbying gives more power to the wealthy which only makes up a small portion of the population. It doesn’t give all Americans an…Read More

  • Sage,
    I love how you started off with an anecdote, it made your essay more personal. The way you addressed a diverse range of topics helped develop your argument and made it more persuasive. Also, I like you addressed your counter argument and offered a solution, it made the negatives seem less relevant.

  • Molly,

    Your piece was very intriguing. I could tell you took a lot of time researching your issue which is greatly appreciated. The way you addressed several religious beliefs and statistics which was beneficial to me because I don’t know much about the topic. Also, I’m impressed by your voice as a writer for you weren’t really biased.

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    Over the past half a century, technology has advanced in more ways than one could have ever imagined. Information that might take hours to find in books can be found in seconds on the phone. Society changed

    Is technology worth it?

    Over the past half a century, technology has advanced in more ways than one could have ever imagined. Information that might take hours to find in books can be found in seconds on the phone. Society changed immeasurably from...

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    • I agree that as long as you have balance everything out and that you do not put yourself at risk with technology then you can use technology as much as you want.
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    My favorite word is constantly changing. When I find one I like better, it becomes my new favorite. Currently, my favorite word is happy. It’s short, simple and to the point. I love how there are so many m

    Bee Happy

    My favorite word is constantly changing. When I find one I like better, it becomes my new favorite. Currently, my favorite word is happy. It’s short, simple and to the point. I love how there are so many meanings,...

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    • One sentence you wrote that stand out to me is when you said “happy is short, simple, and it get’s to the point. You didn’t take forever to tell us why you like the word happy, you just got straight to the point.

    • Chloe,
      This post made me happy! I enjoyed seeing something so positive today. I loved how you took something so simple and made it even more meaningful by explaining what happiness means to you. My favorite sentence was, “There are many synonyms, but sometimes ‘happy’ is the only way to explain something.” Everyone finds happiness in different ways, but it is something each and every one of us has experienced, which makes it a very unifying quality. We are all on the pursuit for happiness, and like you said, it’s an emotion we should all experience. Thank you for your post!

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