I read about your paragraph,
called “ my purpose ”,
I looked at your words,I just thought it grabs my eyes.
I think the point of view is the tree,it says something about leaves.
The leaves use theirs magic to give happiness and relaxation to people.
Through your words,I could know what leaves think is even though they are sma…[Read more]
I am happy about how you wrote your poem, “two poems for beautiful beach,” because i like how u said like a u are the bird flying in the sky.
One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you says i feel like a free bird, but where is my home. I think this is awesome because… it show’s that birds fly where they want to and they are free but they don’t really have a home to stay like humans
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because… i like the way u put yourself in place of an object and describe how that object feels in it’s place, i want u to write more poems like that.
Dear unique Luyao
I am reading about your beautiful poems
called “Two poems for beautiful ocean,”
Because I love it deeply.
One part of your poem that stands out for me is your beautiful sentence and your expression
I think this is so wonderful because you used your words to express a such great view.
Another part that I enjoyed is where you describe yourself as one who out of the picture. This stood out for me.
Because I can feel what you are thinking about.I understand what you feel like,lonely and want to have friends.
Thanks for your wonderful poems. I look forward to seeing what
you make next, because I love you forever.
Best wishes with your art,
The nice poem
The good description
The beautiful artistic conception
The great job
The good idea
It’s the poem to describe the blue ” sky ”
I am ready that I join the world of this poem again
Like that poet
Free and Lonely
I think myself as a lonely poet
Secularism can not stop me keep walking
I am quiet and heard sounds of world
I can see the light of my heart
I can through the darkness way
But I’m still lost
I am lonely
I enjoyed reading your letter. I appreciate people speaking up to the governor for the citizens of Flint. We have been speaking on this issue for a longer amount of time than when it came to light for others, and need for young people to continue the conversation for a basic human right. Thank you for using your voice!
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