• Luyao commented on the post, My poem. 1 year, 11 months ago

    I love your sentence,it’s really beautiful.

  • I wrote they same picture as you,but I wrote 2 poems. You and me are two different kinds,but I think ours are both great

  • I am very glad that you’d like this letter. I just wrote what I thought about this event,and I think everyone should have basic needs and basic safe.

  • Luyao commented on the post, my purpose. 1 year, 11 months ago

    Dear Emely,
    I read about your paragraph,
    called “ my purpose ”,
    I looked at your words,I just thought it grabs my eyes.
    I think the point of view is the tree,it says something about leaves.
    The leaves use theirs magic to give happiness and relaxation to people.
    Through your words,I could know what leaves think is even though they are sma…[Read more]

  • Luyao‘s profile was updated 1 year, 11 months ago

  • The wide sky
    The blue ocean
    The colorful umbrellas
    The flying kite
    The looming moon
    It’s the place where is full of laughing and joy
    I am OK that I stand outside of the beautiful scenery
    Like that bird

    Free and l

    • i liked because you describe, the beauty of the beach.

    • i liked how u put yourself in a object describes it how they feel over there.

    • Good job! I liked yours poems because you used stanzas and u describe the beach.

    • Dear Luyao

      I am happy about how you wrote your poem, “two poems for beautiful beach,” because i like how u said like a u are the bird flying in the sky.

      One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you says i feel like a free bird, but where is my home. I think this is awesome because… it show’s that birds fly where they want to and they are free but they don’t really have a home to stay like humans

      Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because… i like the way u put yourself in place of an object and describe how that object feels in it’s place, i want u to write more poems like that.

    • Good job! I liked yours poem because you used stanzas and you describe the beach.

    • Dear unique Luyao
      I am reading about your beautiful poems
      called “Two poems for beautiful ocean,”
      Because I love it deeply.
      One part of your poem that stands out for me is your beautiful sentence and your expression
      I think this is so wonderful because you used your words to express a such great view.
      Another part that I enjoyed is where you describe yourself as one who out of the picture. This stood out for me.
      Because I can feel what you are thinking about.I understand what you feel like,lonely and want to have friends.
      Thanks for your wonderful poems. I look forward to seeing what
      you make next, because I love you forever.
      Best wishes with your art,
      Cindy Orellana

      Love you forever ever ever ever!

    • The nice poem
      The good description
      The beautiful artistic conception
      The great job
      The good idea
      It’s the poem to describe the blue ” sky ”
      I am ready that I join the world of this poem again
      Like that poet
      Free and Lonely

      I think myself as a lonely poet
      Secularism can not stop me keep walking
      Whatever
      I am quiet and heard sounds of world
      I can see the light of my heart
      I can through the darkness way
      But I’m still lost
      I am lonely
      Do you?

      hell yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh .

    • Maria replied 1 year ago

      Dear Luyao,
      Thanks for this poem about the beautiful beach. I really like how you describe each word about beach because it was good story.
      I can’t wait to see more of your story.

      Maria Malik

    • Dear, Luyao

      I enjoyed the way you described the beach in your perspective and the beauty of it. I really liked how you put yourself in an object and describe how it feels. I think your words and sentences are good expression of the view. your decryption is amazing because I can imagine and feel what you are thinking about and understand. Thanks for your poem, I really look forward to your future work.

  • To Governor Rick Snyder:

    The Flint Water Crisis is an issue that you and the city need to deal with. This is a big problem that must be addressed. The poisonous water threatens residents, it might cause cancer

    • I enjoyed reading your letter. I appreciate people speaking up to the governor for the citizens of Flint. We have been speaking on this issue for a longer amount of time than when it came to light for others, and need for young people to continue the conversation for a basic human right. Thank you for using your voice!

      • I am very glad that you’d like this letter. I just wrote what I thought about this event,and I think everyone should have basic needs and basic safe.

  • Paul and Profile picture of LuyaoLuyao are now friends 1 year, 12 months ago

  • Luyao‘s profile was updated 2 years ago

  • Luyao became a registered member 2 years ago

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