Dear Esthefany, I really like how you're really about your family like everyone else should be. I also like how you showed graphic weight on one of your panels as well. Everyone has different traditions and Im glad you shared yours to us so we can know how you...

Dear Stephanie, I really like how you told this story about your grandma and everything she has taught you, im pretty sure this was a hard topic for you to talk about but it was a great story for you to share. Good Job!

Dear Oscar I like that you wrote about something you love to do. I also like the way you spaced your poem and the details you put into this. I also liked how you described how it felt to be in a soccer game it made me visualize that I...

Dear Vesna I like how you started writing with a good hook that made it catch my attention to your poem. I like how you were honest with this poem about yourself. you used good details in here that made your poem interesting to me. Good Job Mijo

Dear Esthefany You really described yourself on this poem and I know because I've known you for a while already. I like the way you wrote this with good details and good organization. Good Job

Dear Kevin, I like how you wrote this poem, it kinda made it seem like you was writing a rap song or something cause you rhymed a bit. Im glad that you don't care about what others think of you and you don't let anything get to you. Good...

Dear Yaqui, I like how you put in a lot of thought into this poem and how you write with so much detail so the reader can visualize what you're talking about. Good job!

I like how you wrote this and it seems interesting to me that when you were growing up you didn't like your name so much until you grew into it and that when I was growing up I liked my name a lot and when I found out I...

Dear Karyme, I like how you set up your shadow box and it says everything about you in pictures. Good job! Keep chasing your dreams and remember, If you're not first, you're last.

I like how you set up your shadow box and how it says everything about you in pictures. Good job! Keep chasing your dreams.

I like your drawing cause it describes Oakland in a picture.