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    This Is My Comic About My Identity And What Makes Me Who I Am Today

    My Identity Comic

    This Is My Comic About My Identity And What Makes Me Who I Am Today

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    • Dear Luis,
      I enjoyed your comic, it was a story on how you found a passion through cars by taking pictures of them. I’ve seen your pictures and they turn out really nice. I like the details you put like the streets it was a nice touch. Keep taking pictures!

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    I see cars as a big part of my life.

    Not all types of cars though.

    Muscle cars like Camaros, Mustangs, Hellcats, GTO’s, and Trans Am’s.

    I been around muscle cars all my life.

    My cousin used to take me out in

    How Muscle Cars and Photography Made Me The Person That I Am Today

    I see cars as a big part of my life. Not all types of cars though. Muscle cars like Camaros, Mustangs, Hellcats, GTO’s, and Trans Am’s. I been around muscle cars all my life. My cousin used to take me out in his...

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    • Your memoir is strong and explains who you are today. This piece is a good explaination of how far you have came because of muscle cars and photogrpahy. This memoir helped you realize that photography is a big part in your life and might always be.

    • Dear, Luis I really like that you stuck with your dream not a lot people can say that keep up the good work G

    • Luis,
      I really like your memoir it really shows how who you really are and how you got to this point. The part that really stool out to me is “ I won’t say i’m the best camera person in the car scene but I feel like i’m up there.” This stood out to me because you know your not the best yet but your confident about yourself that you are. I hope to see more of your writing because it really shows who you really are.
      Thank you.

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    I’m Chill

    Well when I want to be

    Whenever people don’t get on my nerves

    Of course

    People love to annoy others

    They talk too much

    Also are very loud

    I lose my chill quick

    Very quick

    One

    Why I'm Chill As Hell

    I'm Chill Well when I want to be Whenever people don't get on my nerves Of course People love to annoy others They talk too much Also are very loud I lose my chill quick Very quick One minute I can be good The other I can be very bothered, annoyed And...

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    • This is a good poem because It explains how being chill can be better than being annoying. Also, chill is similar to what I wrote about so I can connect to this poem as well.

    • This is very strong and clear to the point. I like how your poem sound like you even though you aren’t reading it out loud but the way you wrote it sound exactly like you. I have known u for our 4 years in high school and you have always been the chillest and laidback person. Good job!

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    Luis Fernando Carrillo is my full name but, not everyone knows my middle name. I don’t talk about my middle name because it’s not for me. My dad’s full name is the exact same as mine so I’m just a Jr. However, eve

    Reflecting on the Significance of My Name in 2018

    Luis Fernando Carrillo is my full name but, not everyone knows my middle name. I don't talk about my middle name because it’s not for me. My dad’s full name is the exact same as mine so I'm just...

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    • Your piece said a lot about the type of person you are. You are a strong person who struggled to accept your name but at the end of the day you take pride in it, forgetting the negative story behind it. I liked it and it was really nice to read the metaphors. Great Job!!

    • Luis – your problematic relationship with the name “Fernando” makes sense. I’m sorry that you have to carry that. I hope that the load continues to get lighter as you get older. Thank you for sharing and being vulnerable.

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