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• 1 year, 8 months ago

I think he's telling him that his family comes from slavery and that he is stronger than he thinks.

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Luisa commented on the post, "TODAY" by Billy Collins -Read by Kaimea

• 2 years, 1 month ago

I liked how you explained why you chose this poem and I liked how you read the poem and tried your best to portray the tone of the poem. Also, how you explained what the poem means and why you thought it meant by giving an example.

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• 2 years, 1 month ago

Ex Machina

Poetry, Showcase, Spring 2021

April 14, 2021

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By Linda Gregerson When love was a question, the message arrivedin the beak of a wire and plaster bird. The coloraturawas hardly to be believed. For flight, it took three stagehands: twoon the pulleys and one on the flute. And youthought...

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• 2 years, 2 months ago

I Remember

I Remember, Poetry, Showcase, Spring 2021

March 23, 2021

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I remember this past year has been a year of reflection and discovering new things about myself. Being alone for some reason made me develop and discover myself and learn new things about myself. The days are so boring...

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• 2 years, 3 months ago

My story

Poetry, Read/Write Poems, Showcase, Spring 2021, Where I'm From, Writing Like George Ella Lyon

March 1, 2021

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I am from the locket my mother gave me.From mirrors and white tulips and a guitar.I am from the lobby downstairs, screaming and laughing with the other kidsI am from sirens on the walk to the corner store to...

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- Matthew
  2 years, 2 months ago
  
  I am Fascinated by your poem,My story because things you said in your story was realateble with the people in the lobby to the loud music.
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I think the mother are calling for their kids because most of the time kids hang out around the building and the mother are calling them back home it is getting dark.

even if your in your apartment you can hear the train because it so noisy and if you live near a train station even worse.

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I think it refers to kids missing because kids like to hang around the block playing with kids and your parent telling you to be careful.

I think that why Ernestine always mock or get angry at Tish some time.

I get that they're celebrating but why give Tish alcohol?

This got more interesting.

I agree and I also think maybe she went to the police and said she was raped and the police and her lied and put the blame on Fonny.

This is so sad. He's angry but still, worries about tish show you how kind he is a love tish.

I agree with you I think he sacred and kinda traumatized because he doesn't want to get arrested by the police again.

Yeah, he's basically saying how the police are corrupt and how they can control the system.

I agree, It good that her family supports her and help her and is the for fonny.

They wanna change his testimony because if they change it they can say ” change your testimony and you will get out of jail or get a shorter sentence.” They just wanna put black people in prison because they're racist.

Maybe because her parent didn't want her to be her anymore after she testified about what she said “Fonny did”

I don't think so I just think he going to talk about Tish and how is he going to take care of his daughter.

I agree with you because parents want their kids to marry somebody with a stable job because they don't their kids to have to suffer.

Because he probably worried that something happens because she came home really late.

Fonny wants to marry tish because he wants Tish to be his and doesn't want her to get another lover.

I think frank get mad when she talks about god because he probably thinking if God exists why is he doing this to his son.

I think when she means ” holy ghost” is how she very religious and like how she gaining weight and scared even with like the spirit of god she can't fight it?

It kinda cute how he asking so many questions about what she want's.

I think this is where she starts to like him more than a friend.

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I agree I don't think Fonny parents would agree and help tish with her pregnancy. I think it will cause stress and problems for tish during her pregnancy.

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