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  • Dear keily i strongly agree with your post “To what extent are electric vehicles a solution to global pollution?”Because if we the people that live in this world don’t protect it we are going to loss it.Global warming is not the only problem that we have in our world there more like climate change and this cause wildfires,super sto…Read More

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    Part Two Of The First Part Last

    The First Part Last is a book that will change your opinion of having a baby at a young age and protect yourself from it. This boy named Bobby has a baby at the age of 16 named Feather....

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    • Dear Luis,

      I am fascinated about your letter “Part two of The First Part Last” because you show a plethora of information about the book , it also shows you are concerned about what’s going on and you’re trying to help others by preventing being a young parent.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “This is important because Bobby spends too much time with his daughter so that when he somewhere she is going to cry”. I think is confusing because you are kind of contradicting yourself because It seems like the mother of the baby is not being with the baby but how is Bobby being such a bad father ?, if his with the baby all the time and taking her to daycare and going to school?

      Another sentence that I agreed was “I will be looking forward to reading …this book can change people’s thinking of having a baby” This stood out for me because I think is a good way to spread a message to focus on school and not the streets like Bobby in the book.

      I strongly agree with you that is a book that will change your opinion of having a baby at a young age. One reason I say this is because I’m a young mom but is never impossible , i think is really how much people are matured and what they are willing to do when you have a problem like this. Is hard but not impossible and if you’re not ready is best to stay in school and not in the streets.

      Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because situations like this are important to talk about.

    • Dear Luis

      I am amazed about this poem. Part two of the first part last . I was amazed because Bobby had a baby at a young age.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is” This boy named Bobby has a baby at the age of 16 named Feather. Before Feather Bobby used to escape from school and have fun with his friends K-boy and J.L.” I think this is upset because Bobby needs to have a good future for himself to take care of his daughter Feather. “Angela Johnson might leave a reader feeling bad because he is just a kid that does whatever he wants to get out from school with his friend and he has a baby and it is hard for him to take care of her but the good thing is that he is doing his best to protect his baby”. I stood that this will make people feel bad because he is very young to have a kid, and to live the life he lives. Thanks for you writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your stories are interesting , and your stories are about things that’s going in some peoples life.

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    The book, the first part last from Angela Johnson might leave a reader feeling interested because what is in this book can happen to any of us at a young age. 

    The book goes back and forth between “then” chap

    His Daughter Means Everything to Him

    The book, the first part last from Angela Johnson might leave a reader feeling interested because what is in this book can happen to any of us at a young age.  The book goes back and forth between “then” chapters...

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    HI Amani tanks for the comment

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    Hands up don’t shoot… this will prevent people from making a bad choice in their life, from going to jail.

    Guns are made to protect yourself from a bad situation in the future, but some people use these i

    Arguments about guns and police

    Hands up don't shoot… this will prevent people from making a bad choice in their life, from going to jail. Guns are made to protect yourself from a bad situation in the future, but some people use these...

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