• An important purpose of our government, as stated in the preamble of the U.S Constitution is to form a more perfect Union. The president of the U.S plays an important role in ensuring our government actions are

    • I Agree with this article and I believe that President Donald Trump is making a more perfect union. Since he is following through with the goals that he promised to do as a president I think he is using his executive power in a good way.

  • Dear Lizbeth Alvarado :
    I am agreeing about your post “Government Knows Too Much” because sometimes we want our own privacy but we cannot do that because the government is always looking at us. Another reason why I agree with your post is because they do have a lot control over us but it is for our own good. One sentence you wrote that stands out…[Read more]

  • Students online speech should be limited because students who get bullied lose self-esteem and confidence, it is also disruptive to the learning environment and if schools aren’t doing anything to prevent

    • Dear Lizbeth

      I am impressed by your post “Should schools be allowed to Limit students’ Online Speech?” because i did not get a chance to focus on the other side that i did not choose which i though they should not be limited.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “When people get bullied they tend to lose self-esteem and confidence” i thought this was interesting because it is true when people get bullied they lose all their confidence because they start to believe that the person who is telling them stuff is true.

      thanks for your writing. i look forward to seeing what you write next, because i believe that you provide good examples from each text you used. Also you used explanations to be able to understand your thinking towards the subject .

      Daniel Valladolid

    • Dear Lizbeth:

      I am Impressed your article,”Should schools be allowed to Limit students’ Online Speech?” because the information added to your post really is true. I really did not get the opportunity to get a glance of the other side because I had said that schools should not limit our online speech.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “When people get bullied they tend to lose self-esteem and confidence.” I think this is true because you really do not know what a person is going through. Then for people to be attacking them on the internet makes things worse for them.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you can maybe make me see the other side of my perspective. Reading what another person thinks on the subject can help you view both sides and understand them a little better.

    • Lizbeth, your article brings up some decent points, but there is no structure or flow. While the title of your article sways me to believe the post is about cyberbully, you don’t mention social media at all until your last paragraph. Consider providing an initial and more encompassing thesis to build your article off of. This will help with the structure and flow.

      I liked how you thought about teachers in this mix because I feel they are often forgotten. Your cited articles provided adequate evidence to your claims, however, I’d like to know more about the reference articles. Below I have attached another one if you wish to continue your research.

      Lastly, you begin your article with a question: “If schools don’t protect from cyber bullying then who will?”. What about the work that we, as students can contribute in eradicating these types of things? Overall well done, and I hope to be reading more of your posts in the future.


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  • Dear, Jennifer:
    I am for with your post “The Deportation Issue” because you cover things that are happening in the world but no one pays attention to them at all. You also state how people are being brainwashed. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is,”In conclusion Deportation separates families and makes racist assumptions about peo…[Read more]

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