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    Lisa commented on the post, She Remembers

    your poem is so great! it really made me feel something inside i guess i got pretty emotional. Its very sad too. The line where you said,”She doesn’t remember watching her grow because she never did.” really made me think about what you possibly went through. overall i love your poem.

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    Lisa commented on the post, Dear You

    this poem is so good! It has a deep meaning. I like how this poem has a good flow.

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    Lisa commented on the post, Still Learning

    Your poem has a lot of deep meaning and it has really good rhymes.

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    Shells are just like us
    They come in different shapes
    They come in different sizes

    Shells are just like us
    They can be pretty but some are dangerous
    They can be colorful or dull

    Shells are just like us
    Each of

    Shells

    Shells are just like us They come in different shapes They come in different sizes Shells are just like us They can be pretty but some are dangerous They can be colorful or dull Shells are just like us Each of them are unique Each of them...

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    • I love this poem! It’s got great rhythm and imagery. I’ve never thought of a shell like a human but, like your prom says, there are a lot. If you are really interested in shells you might like the book Lord of The Flies. The book is pretty dark and intense but there is an important focus on one shell. It also looks at social behaviors in a fictional story. I think you might like it.

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    I want a non-racist for president.

    I want a person who treats every human equally
    no matter the color.

    I want a president who doesn’t act like Hitler
    is back.

    I want a president who’s experienced the pain
    of

    I Want A Non-Racist For President

    I want a non-racist for president. I want a person who treats every human equally no matter the color. I want a president who doesn't act like Hitler is back. I want a president who's experienced the pain of being bashed just because of their...

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